Im gonna need the raws for this one
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constantly messes up gender and a couple other small issues. so far Iike the story. ziaoalskdifutbbdjqkmakskmsmdkfkglxlslsnrnfickgldllqoaksnfnf
I actually didn't have to burn any of my brain cells to read this novel...
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I have read the MLT version of this story and it was just extremely generic. The guy stays in the library, saves the clan, teaches two little girls secretly(I don't know what his obsession with teaching little girls is) but ya overall it was meh. It's like a copy and paste of all the other sign-in novels.
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[Reviewed on: 15-06-2021]
*Glimpse of initial chapters.*
GOOD POINTS:
- Likeable MC
- Not extremely poverty stricken, MC has some saving and stuff to support himself
- Weak to strong trope is executed well
- MC can think, he observes and doesn't go round being bullied physically (verbally, yes)
- You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, because he isn't
- Expect beasts, Qi cultivation, maybe realms too, and lots of action
- Some realistic elements are also depicted because we spot corruption, injustice, torture, bullying, conspiracies too
WEAKNESS:
- The narration style is highly 'telling' rather than 'showing'
- Author's omnipresent tone is everywhere, which gave lesser screen and insights to the character
- Readable novel, though there are tense fluctuations
- Some information is repeated, such as chapter 2 and 3 has repeated info about Meng Yan.
just like magic ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Reading the story is enjoyable and fun. The chapters are crafted to perfection. The author's descriptive skills really put him inside the novel. All I can say is that this novel is a masterpiece waiting for tremendous success.
So, I'm going to give the work five stars!
False summary, just a hoax from the writer. A trivial novel, a hero, friends, a skirt girl, a trivial novel like the rest of the novel .hjkllllllkkkkkkkkkkkk
I love the story and everything keeps me wanting more! I feel like I'm checking the story 50 times a day for a new update and every time I finish reading the new chapter I just want more! I'm desperate here!
you took the first few chapters from another book and then ruined it after chapter 9, first you changed the character of the protagonist, then you made him a virgin again. you ruined the whole thing.
I thought this novel was familiar and I now know why. It’s a ripe off of Long Live Summon. The only difference is the MC doesn’t have copy abilities and slowly evolves and levels up with hard work. This story is very unsatisfying and everything just works out for the MC. There is no reprocessing for using a spell 12 lvls above his own multiple times and seems to have unlimited energy reserves. Also the story feels as though it was just put from pen to paper. Like they wrote “here is a fight. This and this happens. Fights over and done” it’s written as though there was no thought out into it. Like they wanted to write a fight scene, but the scene in real quick and continued with the story so they can return to the fight scene later to add details and never did. This novel feels more like one of those Chinese knock offs or hastily created movie with a similar name as a big box office movie just to make a quick buck