Review cause novel is 1st person, has good grammar, and tons of tiddi- I mean good plot.
Also author is chill...
But mostly because of the tidd- I mean plot.
When I read harvard, I thought it's that famous school. When I found out it's a name, I was like, okay that's cool. I find your story funny to read, although I'm sure it's not a comedy. I'm entertained by your plot and story set up, especially the character. When it said "sort of float around" I crack up. Anyway, your story is a good material and I wish you luck in your writing journey. Keep up the good work author!
Aside from a few grammatical errors which could easily be overlooked, this story is of much higher quality than many you can find on WebNovel. I enjoy the blend of Sci-Fi and Fantasy, with youkai (I think that was a youkai) and AI all presenting in the first chapter.
Keep up the good work, and I believe you'll excel in no time, Author!♥
Just a head start, this novel author is probably a fan of food war since the character are used from there. Since no one point it out, I just want to put it so you guys can know. No one is really giving any information in their reviews.
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I am caught up with the Translations! Hear me out! This was not meant to be a serious story but a funny one.
This is actually not bad. Yes the beginning was terrible, also terrible world building... I've read 60 chapters but it feels like 200 with little progress.
But read this for the Characters! Honestly, there's still hope Author can turn this around. It's frustrating because there's too little information so I can't really ascertain anything.
To like this Novel is a gamble. It'll either be BS conclusion or not.
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I really must say am impressed with your style and presentation... So early on i can already feel the emotional element of the book pulling me to continue reading.. Such great talent from the author.
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Our time will come, comrade, please continue it
We Vietnamese will always stand side by side with the Soviet comrades. Victory belongs to us
good work for me,I would say
I like the MC's character
please make room for explanation of cultivation levels.
because so far the higher cultivation levels are a little confusing, I don't expect the reader to pause and start checking who's stronger than who.
good and beautiful work so far, I hope it's eventually selected soonest.
thanks.