So far so good. I'm 19 chapters in, they are decent length though, so we already we have a good amount of info and a good foundation for the story and the plot (+characters and backgrounds). The writing quality and grammar are good and it has a real life /real problem drama, even though set in werewolf world. I like that it's more realistic as well, as I have thought of actually writing one just because of wanting it to be more realistic to how things might be if werewolves really existed. so I appreciated that aspect as well. Wasn't looking to take on another book (esp where I am getting to push myself to work on mine own) but it got me hooked. let's hope it stays that way, and that is not another 1000+ chapter story with too many details and random side stories or drawn out scenes. We don't need to read about every work day ?. (which it doesn't seem like it will go that way, but at end of the day it's not my story, write it how you want). So Keep up the good work!!
Hmm, i must say this novel is quite intriguing, the world building, plot development are good, keep it up author .
Next Update Morena. Accelerate your storytelling. I'm waiting for hot hot hot
i really liked the story and writing style , but author is it really dropped because it really has a lot of potential and is still quite a bit popular ?
Rebirth, is a gripping emotional drama that follows Megara and Gabriel Adkins, a married couple on the brink of collapse.It begins when Megara, pregnant and overwhelmed, discovers a lipstick stain on Gabe’s shirt, her suspicions spiral into heartbreak as Gabe asks for a divorce saying his first love is his once again.Somehow she is transferred back to 2014 where she learns to rebuild herself and forgive her husband while gripping with the fact that she has a second chance to save herself from that heartbreak as well as losing her family and his I'd recommend this short story. straight to the point - if you're into 1st person pov
No evil stepmother.No White Lotus stepsister.No toxic best friend.No redeeming, betrayed ex.No pointless revenge plot.This book is a breath of fresh air. Eight chapters in, and I can already feel its incredible potential. The author masterfully handles emotions—I found myself crying through several chapters. I'm fully invested in Asher and Kira's story. They've set a new standard for Webnovel couples, cultivating a genuine, tangible love that readers can truly feel.The world-building is solid, and the author’s writing style keeps the pace engaging without unnecessary fillers or excessive descriptions. Every word carries weight and meaning. I also love the diverse representation, with a Caribbean-Canadian female lead, a British male lead, and supporting characters from Asian backgrounds. The book does a wonderful job of portraying each culture with respect and authenticity.I highly recommend this book—it's a must-read!
3 chapters in and we are getting a lot of info-dumping. The grammar and spelling are pretty good and there is no problem there but the story already seems like its stagnating. There are a lot of words but they don't really give anything to the story and it just feels like wasted space. Some details could be squished down into one paragraph but it seems like the author extended it into multiple. I love the concept and the setup but if Im already getting annoyed at the unnecessary info now then I doubt i could take it later on.
liked everything expecting for for more chapters
THIS BOOK IS PERFECT. It is one of the best reincarnation novels you can find online, with a consistent upload and a wide arrange of characters. The only thing people would complain in this book about is volume 2The switch is kind of jarring and it gets really gridmark and depress, but it is worth it and is also really important in the future.
great book ..............
I find it very odd that a kid that was living alone for years in the slums has not a single ounce of "Street Smarts". Plot armor and System reliance is way too heavy + I'm not a fan of naive Mcs that can't think by themselvesThe world building looks pretty good and it's made in a very unique setting but just the MC ruins it for me. Maybe he gets some character development but I haven't seen other reviews mentioning it...I expect a thief to be smart and cunning but the MC is directly the opposite with heavy plot armor which doesn't make sense given the setting he was raised into
pure power fantasy. no story involved so far.