The author is good for fulfilling the reader's smut needs occasionally. Excuse the little false on the grammars though. Looking forward to the story.
Wow! Just so you know, I am not a very sci-fi person but this does make me want to keep reading and know what happened in the past for our male lead to become like that. I also see that you're heavily influenced by Japanese media.
I did find it difficult to keep up sometimes when there was a sudden change in tenses or the genders while describing the events. Otherwise, it is really a great read, and I, most probably, will continue reading it. I personally really like characters like the raven head maiden. They are the best but my favorite part is male lead's interaction with his li'l sister XD
And also, there is some element of comedy in-between and I really like it.
Both of the main characters are very likable and the story is developing very well. Coming from someone who is generally very picky about plot and writing quality, the character development is great, the plot is unique (not like the generic "transported to another world with random powers" or "randomly and inexplicably gets an overpowered system" garbage) and the writing style for the fight scenes are very intense. The dystopian take on the environment is also well done, and the character interactions are meaningful, with a little humor thrown in to lighten the mood. The only small complaint I have is that the chapters are a bit short.
I don't get why this book is rated so highly. I wouldn't waste your time, it's racist af as others have mentioned and the mc is a beta. One thing that pisses me off is that the female lead isn't fierce... she is an absolute raging btch. Like there is a difference in the two that the author seems to not know. It was fine when she didn't submit etc bit stupid but yeah. Then it went through the whole faze of them getting closer and It would have been cool af if they grew up like a prober fam. So she and the mc with acc love getting stronger in that time with the kids. But instead she "awakens" This completely destroys the story and it goes downhill that doesn't stop. I'm surprised how fast it crashed and burned... I mean nobody wants to read a story where the main character is a btch. Like I said before the author can't seem to tell the difference and thinks fierce translates to arrogance, btch, and literally all them shtty character traits. SO yeah don't waste your time. Unless you like the character I described which I am shocked if you do but yeah...
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The story is very interesting. Just one chapter into your book and I'm already hooked. Another thing I also observed is that your writing quality is flawless. Will love to read more. Keep it up! ?
The main issue with this novel is the lack of imagination, the main characters first body modification was to ‘get wolverines claws’ I can already see that this isn’t going to go anywhere decent, don’t recommend.
Oh, let's see, it's an anime like isekai novel. The reading feels like that the writer himself is an isekai anime fan. I liked the story but the characters design could have been better. Describe the characters more, (eg. what they are wearing). And also certain terms such as "miko" might not be familiar for non-japanese readers. So try to describe what they mean in the story. The concept looks very interesting to me, as an isekai can myself. Overall I pretty much liked the story. I hope you can keep your promise and release at least 1 chapter a week. Work hard.