Bro I read your previous book lunar system too bad you couldn't continue cuz it got terminated, shit I would have given up if it was me, you're like John Cena , "never give up"
The story is intriguing, I will definitely reading it more. Waiting for another chapters from your book. Room for improvement are still there but overall it has a nice story.
Nice Try ..but Don't Try it ,,,.................,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, .....................................
So far it's interesting ? can't decide yet but I'm excited for more ? great work author.
Ahhhhhhhh. I found a gem. I found a gem. Yippyyy. This story is really cool. Man. The author is just, wow. Ten thumbs up ??????????
This story is riveting and I am surprised it's not as popular. This author introduces characters gradually so it's not overwhelming. I like it that the FL is not weak but rather resilient. I love the world building and flawed characters but in the end hoping that" the good triumphs over evil". Nikolai is flawed but he has a heart and I love that -:))
Is it harem? I hope it’s not cuz I don’t know why everyone thinks a villain must have a harem b but it’s a great novel
The quality of writing for the first 15 chapters is terrible. Then it gets better. Around chapter 28 it becomes solid enough to let you enjoy the story without breaking your immersion. so far no kingdom building and not too sure how the author plans to "build" since he has everything from the first chapter, just locked behind an insufficient population counter. The MC ranges from a timid teenager to a cold hearted overlord in different settings. his character is whatever the author decides that day. The power scaling of levels present in the first 30 chapters is totally random. lvl 80 leader of village. lvl 200 centuries ago became a legend to this day. and 5 chapters later in the same place you have 5 npc lvl 200-350 scared to attack a city defended by 2 lvl 200...
The story is decent but the author just rewords the same thing in different ways and repeats whole scenes from different prospectives with almost no changes on how the scene is perceived. Which just makes you feel like you’re constantly reading filler and makes the story progress come to a snails pace. 90 chapters in and he just face slapped 2 women from his past (in the progress of a 3rd) with 0 progress forward yet and 0 new encounters or connections. This story has a lot of potential but im hopping off this train here.
Why is this having less review? My first time rating a book 5.0 this is so amazing. Those who doesn't get what they want early sometimes get something bigger.
It's a pretty good read, I love the characters introduced so far especially Reid. I hope the author continues updating, unlike me...
So far it's pretty good. The FL is somewhat ditzy and cute. Not a lot of brain power. The ML is the typical ML. Side characters and stories also keep the story going. The system is different and I like it for it's mode.