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A novel that is actually pretty enjoyable, MC transmigrates into a bandit, kills people and becomes stronger. Gets life tokens when he kills NPCs and Players, uses to enhance techniques strength/his cultivation. However, in classic Webnovel style it becomes MTL after 60 chapters. So if you can stomach bad MTL I’d recommend you give it a go, if not then this isn’t for you.
Very good novel, very original and with a very interesting and charismatic main character.Highly recommended to read you will not regret it.
I'm going to shamelessly give myself 5 stars. I hope you stick through the first 5 chapters at least before deciding if you like my book or not. I strive to improve my writing every chapter and I would love honest feedback.
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very interesting book , nice plot and interesting characters . I can't wait to see how the story progress . Please more updates , more updates
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )
i love this story soooo much and have been resisting the need to binge the intaier 70chs in one sitting i love the MC he is smart knows cliches and makes use of them (no dense/beta mc), his porsonality is very deep and has layers yet very simpal and we learn of him with the female lead how is one of my fav waifus even thow ther is no image of here
The writing quality is very good, you really can't complain about it, the story starts really great and it is fun to follow it, great writing style. The character is perfect too, not some dumb/pervert/ idiot mc, instead we get for once a mc which is smart. Update stability is good, could be better, like idk 10 chapters a day,??. World background is good, we dont know much yet but I think we will uncover everything aas he story continues
While there are some spelling and word errors here and there. This book is absolutely amazing and the power system is awesome. I really love this story. hfisadgofia sdgnifasdgfjgasdfh
I think it's alright if I rate my novel 5 stars right?
After all what mother would hate her own baby.
All I wanna say is, thank you for reading my novel.
Please leave a review if you liked it.
Have a wonderful day.
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The reincarnation story is not as realistic as the title suggests, but for a green writer, it isn't bad. I love the new Dojutsu, but I find it completely unnecessary when he already has Mokuton. The baby should have been traveling with Tsunade and Shizune after the death of his parents. Backstory I made up: some Senju parents (Tsunade's cousin is the father) leave the village to live safely away from the shinobi life and death. The mother gets assassinated during her pregnancy after the sudden death of her husband. In this story, the being saves the child by having Tsunade walk by and reincarnates you instead of the baby that should not have existed. The mother still dies because this is her fate one way or another. I mean, this is important for the creation of a relevant main character. I believe that the writer would have had an easier time with the story if he added only the Dojutsu to the mc. No need for a headache to sort the backstory, if you know what I mean.
