Sucker for these stories! It was quite a nice and enjoyable read. Hmm. How can I help? I humbly suggest that the author use Grammarly app to further improve tiny grammar and capitalization missed. Please keep it up May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, learn more, and maybe earn more soon!
Character is good, with their own flaws. From my first impression, Zick is my favorite character followed by his older brother. The plot is interesting so far. While world-building is a bit vague... just a bit. OVERALL GOOD STUFF!
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Please fix the grammar it makes it hard to read other than that I enjoy the story a lot keep up the good work and I hope you continue to update
good novel!!!!!????????????????????????..............................................................................
Author here! I appreciate you taking the time to check out the story. Here's hoping that some other people are inspired by the story, for whatever reason, to write similar ones. Take care!
If you ask me about the novel. I will say it's pretty good and better than all the new novels released this year. But the author needs to work a bit more on the world background. The MC is the best no complains on that.
this child is fking garbage....no fillal piety and arrogant to the nine heavens......cocky and thinks he is entitled to the workds wealth with a god complex and im just getting started
This is my favorite genre, and it's written quite well too. No matter how many novels we have with system dungeons and monsters, it would not be enough. Well done. Try it. you will like it.
i do wonder if the chapter of this new rewritten novel is the same with the old version's novel chapters :/ like if the chap 100 of this is chap100 of the older version or does the author changes many things from the older version?
If you like novels with a lot of action and a well-developed plot, I recommend it. It is pleasant to read. I was surprised how well it is written. I would highly recommend
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