Alright, I read chapter 15, and it became borderline unbearable. First of all, the character interactions are dry and seem to be rushed. Second, the MC is unbearable and a complete simp, from the second he met Hilary (his real crush that just happens to conveniently be in the same area as him from the thousands that just randomly spawn in. Plus, his friend is trapped in the game too, but this rich girl who has never interacted with him before is more important). He shows her his secret abilities and grants her free power-ups for no reason besides him being an imbecile. And he has absolutely no sense of danger. He is not at all worried about being stuck in a world forever and just immediately gets over it.
Well..... I did write it after all. Who wouldn't give their own writing this many stars????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I am shamelessly giving my own novel a review. Kidding aside, I've noticed a lot of authors have been doing this to effectively give updates and communicate to their readers. Sooooo, I decided to do it as well. I was gone for a few weeks due to a health condition. But I am back now and I have never been better.As an Author and a fellow reader as well, it is my responsibility to be consistent in updating my work and making sure that everyone is satisfied with it, including me of course, and I understand how frustrating it must feel for all of you to wait so long for a novel to release a chapter.In order to make up for it, I've decided to make it a personal goal to release at least 3 chapters a day to recuperate those days that I've missed while making sure that the quality of the work isn't getting affected. I don't know how long this would last, because I am just very fired up these past couple of days. Nevertheless, I'll make sure to be consistent in my updates. Thank you for your support and have a happy reading! <3 <3 <3
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The villainess is very interesting as her history began to unfold. At Chapter 44 now.
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Can’t read this. Every character so far has such an annoying, snarky way of speech. They’re all radiating nauseating amounts sacarsm and I cringe at every conversation. I don’t really get how someone can enjoy this but we all have different tastes I guess.
Cost of The Crown
Really hope nnone buy privilege. Author is complete liar. All promises are broken the day they are given. Story is almost repeat of the first book which was dropped because author didnt get enough money after all shit he gave his readers. Too much cliche and cliffs.
I really would like for the mysterious black magician to get completed, it started off slow but got a little bit better I believe if the author continues to develop the story it will start to improve their skills . I just hope this isn't another story that gets abandoned and stays incomplete .
I red already 3 hapter of the Novel and think it is a very good novel, wehn you have to wait for something or drive Bus. While driving to school i normally read like 1 or 2 chapter.
Liked.
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