good story, if only the MC was smarter than a 5 y.o kid it would be great.
I find this novel very interesting! It is just my type that gives the feeling of having deals with the devil (mc).
Furthermore I find his abilities very interesting while not being OP it has room for growth.
In conclusion this is a good novel do not hesitate to give it a try!
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one of the best ones I've read so far. A must read.
This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned.
A few examples:
- Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it
- In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his”
- MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER
- MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened
A unique take where Allen the Mc, is the demon emperor in the game. I do like it, but it’s unfortunate that Allen and his demon wives don’t get to have equipment drops from unaliving enemies nor do they get the double exp like players in special events.Grammar is ok, character development is coming along. My main issue is the situation with the ex who cheated on Mc. Allen already met with her, they hashed it out. He rejected her and is moving on with his in game wives to irl. For some odd reason, the author keeps forcing the Sophia situation. 400+ chapters and she’s still in the picture. Chapters are dedicated to her and her simps when they def could’ve been used to flesh out Allen’s relationships with his seven wives.I mentioned how obvious and forceful these tedious situations were and the author responded by using Amber Heard as an example. Apparently, she’s now accusing Jason Mamoa of something. When I read that response, I sat there in disbelief for a moment, bc what?!? That’s your justification for dragging out this nonsense? Welp, just as I exited myself from reading anything Amber related(bc that too was dragged too long), I am exiting this novel. A shame too bc I really enjoyed Allen and his women. Good luck in your writing endeavors. ✌?
I love the sadistic humor of madara so much probably bcs I have the same humor and I really like how the story flow is and Im so happy that this book has NO harem.
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About 5 of the chapters are repeats and makes reading this a total mess if they don't fix this then this shouldn't be continued in any form what so ever
This novel is really good, has great ratings, a lot of supporters and I've expecting it to get pick for a month now but it still hasn't gotten pick while another novel with a 2.7 ratings and bad reviews got pick like wtf
its a game but, not really. its another world but the mix of players, again not really. a weird blend which is hard to swallow maybe inedible. and why is this type of novel here again? i thought we were over with this? Now.
The Mc has become a Npc which should have been ok IF there were no players.
addition of players make me not take it seriously cus its a game. just a GAME i can't read it knowing its all Big BS. maybe later in the story author would make it so that this world is real and things.
another problem is that people don't die even dead NPC( others) cant die they will revive, a big down for me because u can't be immersive enough in this because its just unreal.
One of the best out here.
This novel really is a hidden gem. There aren’t many novels with characters as complex and well written like this one.
Give it a try and you probably won’t regret