The book is good no doubt about it, the author has a different sense of writing which is called "camparism" he like to compare things to much without proper info just based on behavior and looks which is sometimes annoying. Every chapter has comparison of some kind in it. Overall if you're a knew reader without reading other great cultivation novels this is good one for you for old readers the cliches are too much, the harem tag will kill this book because the mc seems horny all the time and is attracted to every female he meets.
I enjoy harems but mindless one's are horrible to read, Other than those it's a good book the author can do better though with proper research for his readers.
I'm just gonna lay this out here. The MC goes from making flint spears to black powder rifles in hours. Then becomes a slave. Then leaves. Then goes back to help the people that enslaved him. Seriously. Its like the author added every damn random thought he had to the story. He's inventing rockets and, I **** you not, takes a boat half way around the planet to introduce fucking paintball to the virtual worlds version of a tech fair. This is a guy who's apparently invented A.I. in the game world by the way.
I'm so done with this **** show mash up of a story.
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I honestly dont usually like novels on PUBG much as theyre mostly super cliche or stupid plot. But this one is good. I hope author can pace this normally and explore other games too!!
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Good ☺️ novel must have in webnovel.. finally a GD novel among here
Es chocante ver como alguien del sector cultural de un país "Escritor" , puede arrodillarse de semejante manera para mamar pijas a un pensamiento político que no representa su estatuto económico.
Y mas aun es impensable que el publico popular culto de china "Lectores" pueda tragar semejante mierda y pagar para que le inflen el estomago de pensamientos políticos ultra-derechistas.
No solo no recomendable, sino evitable.
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first of MC is idiot not only naive also idiot, he says he can't further his cultivation but doesn't use the pills left behind by his father and mother even though trillion of lives are on the line because what pride?? that's shitty so many USELESS info dumps oh so so so many of them
This novel is great I cant wait for the Author to come back and write it again! It has lots of potential and doesn’t have any major issues like widespread grammer issues etc. i cant wait to read this again
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