50 chaps in, im gonna drop here
Nothing really interesting going on
This novel has potential if som1 better could re write it
it came from the ring of endless. remember that he killed the dragon in the game before transmigrating and robbed the dragons lair so he has many materials because dragons love treasures.
When will a new chapter be released?
Who would win roman empire at its peak and the emperor is Augustus Caesar and his generals is Scipio Africanus, Gaius Marius, Pompey, Sulla and all of them are injected with super soldier serum and all it's military vs the army of Azog who would win
reads like chat gpt wrote it chapters 16 and 17 are good examples the same thing was explained 3 different ways with 3 completely different outcomes from the middle of 16 to the beginning of 17
This is my second novel, so this story is made after learning and correcting all the past mistakes I made. It is a story with high focus on the protagonist, he won't be a perfect character right off the bat. I plan to make the characters have their own distinct personality and goals. The world building will be expansive, but not like the cultivation novels where one level is revealed after the other. Instead, it will go into more depth.And finally, I hope you guys give this novel the same support I got for my last one, even though it was an amateur work riddled with mistakes...
The Mech Touch is one of the best original novel in this site, sadly it was become worst and worst. The story itself is interesting, the writing is a solid one, it is one of the best writing quality I have ever seen in original novel.
So whats the problem? At first the story progress is slow but detailed about the MC, it was understandable as the author try to paint the world around MC. But what happen if that keep happening for 500 chapter? Then you got slow, full of bs and useless story or filler you may call. The story development become more and more slow, and you got a turtle pace story. Mob character get so much attention for 10-30 chapter and then disappear as they either dead, or become useless for the MC.
Then you may think, why dont the author cut the filler, focus on the MC and stop making the story longer and longer than necessary? My answer, greed, the author is full of greed for your SS. Not it is wrong, not my problem, my problem is the time you wasted reading this useless filler story that got little to no impact to the MC and core story! You hope the story progress but for 3 days or 6 chapter and more it still stuck to that one battle with almost no relation to the MC, author keep making detailed BS of this mob character A who killed mob character B, C, D, E, F and so on so on. And it was not the first time he do it! While he keep making this BS nobody care, the character building become abandoned, many important side character got little to no story, and a mob character got more than 10 chapter, "u mad bro?"
Another problem of this "detailed filler" is it wasnt even that interesting or correct enough, the chain command in the military is so bad and stupid the MC's country should be destroyed long ago. The mob character got to many explanation, you start to think maybe he become the next side chara, and then bam, no word anymore. Another time there is a filler full of mech battle, wait not that kind of mech battle, I mean what pilot in mech battle think in the fight, it wasnt even that interesting or important, and it got so many explanation! Like the reader care about that kind of BS! The author only want to increase word count like greedy chinese webnovel author, so he got more SS.
Author build so many background BS, the story become so full of background story that got no explanation or attention for a long long long time! And he keeps adding more! The MC unfinished problem at chapter is maybe 1 or 2, but at chapter 500 he got 10 or more. There is no focus in the story, author is not just greedy about SS, but greedy about all kind of story development. It become to chaotic because of all the filler!
This novel is a HONEY TRAP! It have excellent writing, but chaotic story development. You may read and think how good the story is at first, but as you go, and read far above 200 chapter, it become snail pace and full of filler. The problem is it was very subtle, and when you realize it you already read far to many chapter, therefore a honey trap, it was a good story until you realize it is a trash.
Dont believe me? Read it yourself! Waste you time, I dont care. I only rant here because the author never read comment.
first of all he doesn't have an advantage because his memories only come when he gets hit in the head, second then there is no need for him to introduce firearms, although there are hopes of cannons or grenades and the like, third, first we it shows a brave and strategic young general, but then it shows us a weak general, incompetent and I don't understand the last thing, if his soldiers have armor, experience, he can finish him off but he decides to be a hostage, pathetic.
Although I know what you want to get with the problems you face
although it is good but it does not fit much.
So gaming stories aren't really my thing but I will say this story was quite enjoyable. Really liked the plot (although I wish the blurb had been written better - it really undermines the story) and characters were amazing. I'm really curious about how the two characters are going to get on.
Grammar was okay but there were times it was a little messy with missing punctuation and capital letters. Otherwise, I'm excited to see where this author takes this story.
Si estás leyendo este comentario tus padres morirán dentro de 5 años. Para deshacer esta maldición necesitas copiar esto y pegarlo en otros 5 manga. Lo siento, también me maldijeron, no se puede subestimar la maldición de personas al azar.
raw name plz!!!
Really nice story. Just confused, is it Harem or not. but that makes it fun....
I think the MC is growing as a character, some scenes are not 'realistic' but then again the guy did take over a new body, who am I to complain.
Grammar can be better but overall really enjoyable read