I just started using WebNovel and found this gem. I have to say this is one of the best books I have read. Keep up the good work author, can't wait for more chapters.
I don't see this fanfic anywhere else . so it is not plagerised. Finally I like where this story is going, keep it up
The synopsis has the hook that I'm looking for, and for the love of god, my head ached when I read about genetic engineering. Although I hesitated to read it as I'm not interested on any science-y novels, the way the author wrote this story flat out slapped me with the reality. I shouldn't judge without reading the contents lol and that's how good this is. I'm actually waiting for the next chapters, so I expect a chapter soon! THIS IS A MUST READ!
I feel like I should finally give a review as this is like the second novel I read regularly but I don't really know how to write a review so here we go:1:Translation is great I think though I don't know what the Translation Quality rating is for as I think this was originally written in English but it's good.2:Updating Stability is good most of the time can't really say much else.3:Story Development arc 1 was fun and as a fan of durarara I like different povs.4:Character Design is cool though I feel like more discription would be good.5:world background is probably my favorite part of the story so far since it reminds me of toaru with there being a magic side and a science side.This is the first review I have ever written so it might not be the best I just hope this story gets more exposure.
Ok... I read my work after the blackout from the writing and found many shortcoming in the story. So I thought why not review my own work. So far I think the pace of the story is good.. comedy felt good except for some cringy part. Grammar is ****ty with lots of substance missing. Characters are pre established in Canon and no major changes except for ocs. Overall I think it's ok for just casual reading. I think I can except it as passable for my first story.
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The story is quite interesting, and i was quite amazed how long every chapter was. But upon continuous reading, the explanation just goes on and on, it's like 40% main story and 60% explanation on how things work, what that thing is, etc. This made me skip a couple of paragraphs, but still get the gist of the story.
So author-nim, please omit the long-winded explanation, and unnecessary inclusions.
Eh.
Sorcerer's Journey - dropped.
This week World's Best Martial Artist - dropped.
These were my two main novels and they were pretty solid compared to other ****.
A lot of good trial novels - never picked up.
They pick up trash like this. This novel is crap and you already have better upgrades of it like Library. F***
Hope upon hope
Choice upon choice
Chance upon luck
Sing to this hollowed ground
Shall light read upon the stars’ light
And beckons upon a new story.
Let us see the virtual world crash upon the moon’s sight.
i want to see more of the main character other than the detective. the mystery between the twins is now solved which is one of the confusing things i've read but after that chap where they mourn the dead detective, most of my questions were answered.. on the last chap updated, I never imagine the MC being sweet and all but izz cute.. more powers to you, author
Why did I never see this book until now? This is a greeeaaaaat book, and I hope someday to be as talented as this author. This is definitely staying on in my library, and I will keep on reading it during my leisure and dropping comments. I'm impressed by it[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Nice story.
Still a sign in so the MC get 10000 sculpture and has the ability to train them all, but still isn't too overpowered
World background on midieval China, but the eunuch part is quite daring, how can an incomplete man still cultivate...
Mystery ..