DreamLord14
Good pacing character isn't overly op where it's boring to read and the story is progressing in an okay direction but the mc needs to question his morality a bit.
As much as I can enjoy the millions of face slapping novels out there, this just isn’t it. I don’t enjoy plagiarism(not an accusation). Everyone in the novel is brain dead, I almost thought a gen Alpha wrote this. Grade: 21/100
I'm lost in words like don't have anything to say but an update will do please. Want to know about Lily nd Hou bloodline. Are they related in some sense nd what will happened to Anqi
I'm focusing on character building, world building and how one deals with problem of life and death with an eccentric attitude.
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It's simply cr*p. God, mercy me for too late dropping this novel out but i will do now. The story development so quick and it's good but leave too many loophole which is make the story become nonsense at all. Author should put steady flow of plot and build the background story up first before jumping right here and there to show how mighty the mc, and also author shut learn more about how human being could react in different situations so you can build a strong impression about life in the story
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