DreamLord14
Finally finished this..Roller coaster was how it felt while reading this. I was bothered, annoyed, pissed, glad, happy, sad, upset, confused, angry.. All those stuff I felt.
This novel is light and good to read. I kinda like how Li Song was able to marry Wei Lou on a different timeline, at least he was given a chance. But i felt sad about Song Hui coz he really love Wei Lou.
For me this novel is a good read to pass time. Try reading 100 chapters first you'll be surprised.
Veldona is very unhinged. The MC being constantly perplexed is a great touch to this story.
What a crappy translation! the translator should either take a basic grammer/writing class or just pass the translation off to a competent translator like the 25th_chestnut.
I rarely want to write a review, but this time, I iust can't stand it. I really don't know how this novel get into second rank in weekly vote nor do I know why those people who gave 5 stars review only has "zero chaps read" in their stats.
But the one thing I know is, this novel is really a compilation of FULL OF TRASH !
Very bad that even with my quite easy to satisfied reading preferences refuse this novel!
I am not talking about preference kind of stories, nor did I do this for a black campaign, but this novel really does it in a most TRASHY ways..
The MC is a hypocrite, full of nonsense justice, but his actions latter contradicts his sense of justice, the world revolves arround him (many MC like this). Those things I can accept.
The logic of the story is nonsense, e.g: the monster hit the MC with a giant hammer with the speed of sound in close quarter combat and mc got to dodge it by ducking down while his body is only in a normal citizen level, and there is no sonic boom accompanying that hammer who's moving at a speed of sound? This kind of stupid logic I can also live with that.
When the world is in danger, and all the world's leaders gather in one place, all the world's most beautiful minds thinking of a way to survive but can't think of anything except to receive that fate and die, here comes the time the MC to shine, by proposing a stupid idea that any 10 years old kid should know and the whole world sing a song of genius praises to him!
And this happens many times!
This doesn't prove that the MC is a genius (like the author intend to do), this only proves that the whole world are just a bunch of idiots. And I wonder how they even manage to live this long before the MC transmigrate a month ago?
This I can't accept. The MC only show you that 1+1 is 2 and einstein class genius would praise him for MC's genius.
What a stupid novel.
Read it at your discretion, I'm sure you will be disapointed, don't trust the vote and assume this is a good story, and last thing, you have been warned !
This story is progressing nicely with all the intriguing developments of Yao Ying and Yao Ling. The two main protagonists’ characters are written well although I find that the author made Yao Ying into a man who’s too fixated on *** and is overly jealous. There’s a time and place for acts of love, yet he’s constantly finding ways to ‘eat tofu’ from his wife. If I’m Yao Ling, I’ll probably be so stressed and upset to be just taken for *** object. I hope that this mission will give the readers more actions and less of Yao Ying’s clumsy attempts to seduce his wife. I often skipped chapters of Yao Ying’s lascivious acts of seducing Yao Ling and move on to the story itself.
This book has a very unusual storyline, and definitely will catch your attention. It is a very "out of this world" type of story. I find it very interesting and catchy as a reader. I also loved how the author was descriptive at some points throughout the novel, especially where you needed the information. I can't wait to read more when I have free time, and leave another review after I finished the book completely. Hands down to the author for creating such an amazing and captivating storyline.
I do want to add I am the user from the forum known as the BellsandlexShow!!!
Very good story, but the guy who wrote it is horrible at math, so just ignore any math mistakes.
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.
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I find it a good read. Different from other novels here. Wonderful story and well developed characters. Not your wishy washy romantic or too op mc here. Overall i find myself looking forward every evenings for an update. I hope it could release 3 times a day.
