CAUTION!!!!! The author decided to cuc the MC. by turning all women into futas to do each other, get out while you can. Run as fast as you can before the army of futas come to get you.
I really like how you have build your story world and how you are progressing is. The fast updates are a great bonus. I am really enjoying it at the moment.
An amusing and truely well written story set in a transmigrator/cultivation setting.The characters are somewhat unconventional (or refreshingly non-cliché), there is at least one absolutely adorable beast; world building and the character backgrounds are well paced, as well as intriguingly written, resulting in this novel being (at least in my personal opinion) an absolute gem to read and enjoy ?
A solid read. I would suggest that this should get out of trial and into normal TLing. This is a fairly funny and odd take on the ideal xianxia novel.
I like some of the more abstract concepts this story throws at the reader, like betrayal, and there certainly is a cohesive theme, something that really ties the story together. I will give more feedback later, but I see no reason why this would not have potential after a little editing. Also - I really, really like action scenes like the ones in this story.
There is a lot of original content here even if it is mostly rehashed ideas from solo leveling. Unfortunately, the author throws that out the window and just goes full retard. There are a bunch of original kingdom names but also South Korea and an ant king that he names Antares. Author must have just run out of content or something since there was so much already set up to lean into.
Just dont waste your time on this. Most parts either dont make sense or plain stupid. 0 character development. Coming from future is just a hastag and no relevance to the story or anything
Good book hope you don’t drop :). (I will now spam E’s for word/letter count) EEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Enjoying the story so far.The book contains strong resemblance to other VRMMO novels, that's to be expected. The author even mentioned that it was inspired by the likes. Just thought to mention that first and foremost.What separates this from other novels of this genre is the MC, who is a returner from a Isekai world. I like his thought process. He thinks through things and knows what he's doing. His expierence in the Isekai world heightened his senses, and while you might say that makes him OP, and the story boring, the author depicts it as a liability. I want to see him overcome that.As mentioned before, the story is very much inspired by other novels of the genre. Thus, the world-building inside is very similar/the same to those of other stories. As a avid Eastern fantasy/lit rpg reader, I would've like to see some differences.Finally, I want to conclude this review with words about the writing. Info dumps are relatively low, and grammar is above average. I notice though the structure and fluidity between paragraphs can be improved on. There can be some rewording and better word choices to make the writing sound not so bland and flat. All in all, this is a great read for fans of LitRPG and VRMMO. Characters are great and story develops very well. I hope author keeps up the good work.Happy reading!
I can't wait for this novel?.The idea having is mismatched system goldfinger is hilarious. I hope the author is creative with the character and I'm excited to see how they implement the idea.I will update my review after the novel has been released <3
the daoist hereeeee. I have been keeping an eye n this one and it was really worth it