Honestly, any story with a dragon can't be bad. Dragons are just that cool and make anything better. So read this or you know, don't. I'm just writing some text here, can't really make you do anything other than read this text MUAHAHAHAHAHA
Please write again!! The work is very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I've been waiting for 2 years!!!
This is a review of the first chapter. The main character is Li Yu who was orphaned at age 11. To avoid going into the army Li Yu has been working as a hunter to feed and shelter himself and his younger brother. The world he lives in has both mortals and immortal cultivators. During one hunting trip, he finds a gem inside his prey. Soon after a mysterious voice keeps asking him to join a cultivation chat group. The story is written with a sense of humor.
I see potential in this just do some more chaps and quick updates u will see this in top 50 in 30 chapters.Keep it up............................................
Thats a suprisingly good story.Very nice to find something this good in the originals. I will be reading that and i hope it will stay on this level;]
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Simple yet engaging to many readers (especially otakus, hey there! ??).. As a reader who is an otaku, it actually suits my tastes. I hope in the next chapter it would be in a third person's view so that it wouldn't be too confusing for some readers. Because the more you keep on shifting each character's POVs, some would tend to lose interest because it is quite confusing. I hope that you could add up some more spice with the world background. I hope this review isnt too offensive... ?? I am just giving a few suggestions. I really like the story so I just hope that you would reconsider if ever :)If you want it first POV, please do use some more sensual words to let people imagine what kind of world you are putting your character into.... Thats all thank you! I hope you dont find this review offensive ?
I read up to Chapter 7 which Evolution Online may be introduced in detail after (that’s my assumption). So far, the characters are written well. The set up and background is there for an all SYSTEMS GO! Keep up the good job!
loved this, so sad the author dropped this book
I love it so far ngl, It's so enjoyable and I really like the comedy behind it. Also the relationship between the main character and Ruby is so cool.
[Disclaimer: This is a personal opinion]Good writing, way too gruesome story, sometimes disturbing.I highly suggest to avoid this novel unless you are strongly into antiheroes/villains and maybe gore (is this the right word?). If you are into it, however, you may love this.Background kinda typical cultivational world.**: I couldn't read a lot of chapters because I found this novel increasingly disturbing, so not sure if it gets better
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