Misleading tags... it's not a novel it's pure ntr erotica.... Only difference is it's long & too much edging...
really looking forward to more chapters, would appreciate more/week.
This fic really needs some good editing.
Great start but then they carry on to long on the first mission theirs zero direction and doesn't feel like a story and I'm like 66 chaps in just so much potential not fully executed
I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel, Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).BYE
The novel is not bad at all for what it is, if you came here for R18 stuff than you good.. writing quality its ok,,, world development well didn’t see any as of chapter 20 so I don’t really count it it’s still early,,,, update stability we get around 2 chapter per day so really good for me... all in all as author is new and English is not his first language this is a well deserved 4 stars.... If mc was op would have been a personal 5 stars (I like op mc) but well mc gotta struggle... mc probably will be strong later on but I don’t get that invested in R18 novel to read around 100 chapters before I get my badass mc.. well thanks and author keep on the hard work...
Knee jerk review as of chapter 10. I'm all about the beginning few chapters of being high importance as that's what makes me keep reading. So spoilers are here but only up to chap 10.It's so far The Rising of the Shield Hero but edgier. Generic MC and backstory, the classic bullied by everyone, he's useless, powerless, etc, then gets crazy powers, and a system to boot. The writing can be repetitive and at times is so choppy it becomes tedious to read. World building is glossed over more or less as he "studied in the library" and knows most everything of importance. Level scaling, explanation of magic, just a general sense of what is "strong" to be able to compare to isn't their either in my opinion. He also levels up insanely quickly as it seems killing single wolves while he's way above their level still garners him a fair amount of exp. Which is also never mentioned or shown, he just levels up instead. So the sense of progression isn't there and it begs the question why not just cheese it and power level off of weak beings. Why even need a slave? He says he needs a meat Shield but he seems to be doing fine on his own. Even going out gaining like 3 levels with ease just after he gets the slave and this is while it's recovering. Overall it's pretty middle of the road, not really doing anything new or interesting. I may pick it up time to time to see if it gets better or maybe skip a few chapters ahead and deal with the lost information. Like I said the beginning is the most important to me as it sets all my expectations for the whole book and right now I'm just kinda "eh" ?u200d♂️ Also I have no idea about updating stability, so freebie 5 stars lol.
I want to see where this is goin.. Up till now its great read and bring no disappointment. Keep the good work author..I need a filler, i need a filler.
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I liked this novel very much although the MC is weird but it creates a lot of funny situations and dialogues ??. The story is also good. Its really keeps the person hooked as MC smart deduction really surprises u sometimes. The story also progresses well
For everyone saying there netorare there is none for a person who originally read this years ago n royal road there is none there is a girl who vying for the affection of the main character even though he is solely devoted to his wife and so the infidelity part come from that it not large but its their netorare isn't always the hentai equivalent it just mean infidelity but it been years since I read it so I dotn remember if they actually do the deed the books is great and I enjoyed it all those years ago to bad the guy start slowing down on updates and other projects so I stopped reading it I think it was my first major reed on royal road so good luck man happy to see you bacl