Its pretty good story wise, but the writing style and grammatical errors are just huge deal breakers for me. Good luck author, but poor writing is poor writing.
story is good and well developed and characters is also good but updating story is pretty bland try updating more frequently good luck ? ?
Just read the novel without reading the comments, form your own opinion on the novel. Its a good novel with good story, good characters and good plot. If you read it, you will like it.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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Exactly how I rated it. Story wise it is just a hodge podge. Just plain bad. Writing quality is pretty bad too. Mao Ni has written a 100 chapter story with a 900 chapter companion book. So many repetitions, flights of thoughts. Zero character development. Boy oh boy. A major waster of my time. World building is done well in the sense that it keeps mentioning all this quintessential chinese wuxia stuff that are great but they are always in the background. Now. the translation is the worst. If you want something far better quality wise, just watch Handsome Siblings on Netflix.
it was a great story. the author just did amazing job, I am currently recommend this for you who want trying something new. the outline and even the way he tell the story makes me more enjoying this
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Ok, you can take this as a bs review since im only chp 1, but im gonna say my piece. The story so far is terrible. This random girl that everybody likes and wants to be with has taken a bet in a game, and everybody cares because the bet is to make her leave the class. So, she gets help from the class by considering being the gf of the person who wins. Forgot to mention every classmate is thirsty, and author makes an uncomfortable analogy about betting wives with respect to random girl. Ok. If that isnt a red flag for you right from the start idk what to say. Oh yeah, translation is pretty bad too.
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The sypnosis is like that...
Dont need to thank me.......
It’s the kind of story where I have to force myself to read, and sometimes I blank out because it’s so mind numbingly boring so I have to reread all over again.
At least the Escape Livestream novel from the same batch is entertaining, even though they both have OP systems.
That one made me binge all the way.
I’m dropping this one
you need to re edit some of the sentence cuz it was kinda hard to read
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This one is an amazing sample of the fantasy. I attached is too much...It is very good... Thanks to the author for sharing such a good one...