Aoki_Aku
A interesting novel that makes use of generic trops and make something insteresting out of it, honestly Solo Leveling copies should learn a thing or two from this.I like the system a lot, it was the first time I read something with a Streamer-like system and the constellaions are amusing, the skills use % instead of raw stats wich is a forever a victory in my opnion, it makes it easier to visualize and the power scaling turns less confusing.I like the protagonist attitude, she is not a wimp and her reactions make things interesting. The way she makes the best she can out of hard situations and bad odds is really good.I also like that her privileges work with Friendship/Love Power, in the future she could probably fight like a mahou shoujo with hearts and rainbows flying everywhere saying stuff like "ray of love stuffed sunshine!
Hey Happyman42, how about we connect on Discord as well? It's a cool place to hang out and chat about your stories. Could you drop me your Discord ID if you're up for it?
please read this and give me your humble support .
If you like exposition, useless fillers, repetition, excessive repetitive descriptions, and eventually plot movement every tens of chapters....this is for you. It had potential, but the writing style just screams filling out word count.
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It’s quite good actually.........................................................................................................................
only problem are the English names they bring down the quality and disturb the flow of the story
Why would you think that after reading Chinese novels for years we would now like English names
Your talent is clear hun.... writing is definitely your calling
The synopsis itself will arouse your curiosity making you want to read more. Great novel, keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more chapters
The first ten chapters are very instructive concerning Japanese martial arts, it incredible how much you learn from this novel, additionally, the story development so far is top notch!
The book is so interesting...
The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too.
Not to mention the very attractive title.
I love everything about this book so far
This is a very interesting and detailed book about a team of people and their adventures they have on their journey. Its a cool story with a few comedic stuff in it. Overall its really great, but the grammar isn't to good. Other than the grammar, its great!
