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"Why...why did you let go of our relationship just like that..?" Wang Yan asked earnestly.
Slowly she gently touches the tiny chest of her son with her trembling hand to feel the pulse, feeling the rushing beats of the heart, she softly sighs feeling the burden in her heart lifted...
"kept Duka on our side. Don't let Mr Xu get her to be silent. Ching need extra guards on. How is my Daija?" Jun drinking his tea. "Yes, sir. The Daija already on the way to Choi Clan while three groups of them still in the ops to Colombia," Brian reported to him before walked out to arranges more security for Ching in the hospital and moved Duka to the safe place in Liam hotel room.
"Y-you just f*cking t-talked." I say in disbelief. The cat rolls its eyes.
"Everyone, this teddy bear is nameless, so it's a tradition for us just to call it the creator's name and then teddy bear. The owner of this teddy bear is one of the grandmasters of our very own sect. Although deceased, we continue to honor her name. We haven't been able to retrieve records of her full name, so she remains a mystery even until but we have retrieved her first name. Her name is Shiro, so we call this Shiro's Teddy Bear."
Luke turned and tried to cut but there was nothing and soon he heard a whistling sound coming from behind, but this time he parried whatever it was and located the source and used Force Pull to make the enemy visible but he was very surprised to see that the creature merely was moved by a step. He had used a lot of strength so the result really stunned him. Even though he was shocked, he finally could see the attacker. It was a humanoid creature with deformed traits and an armor which seemed to have been melted with his skin. The vision was terryfing but it rang something in the mind of Luke.
'You can use her then leave her behind once your mother wakes up!'
he defeted the demon king dragon master with just his pinki pinger suuuuper easily
I love the story. Another amazing work from the author.
Very nice for those who likes beast ... jksv
the story is really good and i recommend it
Writing quality - It has a few errors in the chapters but its easily ignorable or you may not even notice them. Stability of Updates - Its about once a week, which for a kingdom building novel is not anywhere close to enough. Especially since the chapters are REALLY short and sometimes have very little going on in them.Story development - In 13 chapters so far id say the story has advanced plenty. BUT this is entirely because of time skips and has nothing to do with the actual writing. Basically the chapters are the MC doing something minor like a tournament or summoning characters or thinking about his plans again and again. Then the story has a time skip and all of a sudden he has a fort built or a spy network all around or a deal done with MAJOR characters. Basically all the things we wanted to read about were summoned up in a checklist after a time-skip and the things we don't actually care about or effect the story majorly are mentioned (though even then it is in very little detail).Character Design- There isn't much to say about the character, he isn't bad nor good. We know little about his past but that honestly is fine. We don't see any character development probably because the chapters are too short to pull something like that off. Or maybe its because the System does EVERYTHING for him. I wouldn't be surprised if the system has a character he can summon to wipe his behind. Due to the system being OP we never see the MC do anything worth while. Maybe when the MC gets his kingdom this will change but I bet it will only cause the system to become MORE OP.World Background - Its the GOT world so its already built for him so its hard to mess this up. And he doesn't mess it up, he seems to know what he is talking about. He did add more population into the world which I like very much and hopefully this has a Major role in future events.Overall - Its worth a read and wont take you more than 2 hours to get through all the chapters so far (if you are a slow reader and like reading the wiki when he mentions locations and people to learn more).
