KelvinSekwatiyuN
A bit wordy, yet very interesting. The world-building is strong in this one.MC doesn't blindly get op but actually uses his brain, making plans and all.For now, he can't trust anyone and srsly just wants to fck over his rivals.Kinda reminds me of early **.Interesting to read and sometimes funny even.Can't wait for more chaps?
First time posting a review (but this also means it's the first time I found a sorta new book worth giving a review to)Starting with the writing quality, it's got good grammar, decent sentence structures which are not too long or short and no typos.The story pacing is decent, there's no rushing into different plots and there are no unfinished plots or loopholes either. The story continues steadily which fits the character well.The character design itself is amazing. MC isn't dumb, he can think and avoid attracting trouble (like when he gives spirit stones only to extract, doesn't upgrade cultivation level, hides level and conceals power) and can react to difficult situations (as proven in with the 'sword thief'). He doesn't rush blindly into situations, nor is a cowardly rat.He makes amazing use of his system and must I say that this is the best system in existence, to the point that I was insanely jealous of MC at one point. The world setting is a simple cultivation world but it fits the story perfectly as overcomplicating the world would only disrupt the casual vibe the story gives off.All in all, this book is amazing and I keep looking forward to chapters. To the author, pls never stop updating this book until completion and thanks a lot for this top-quality content.
This **** is the most confusing thing i have ever read in my life WTF is going on bro???????????!!!!!!!!!!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!??!!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!????!??!?!!?!??!!!!!!??!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!
The first series was fantastic and something to look forward to. When I heard there was a second book I was beyond excited. Sadly that's all the excitement I've had for this book. Instead of a continuation it's basically a repeat with washed and redone stories. Might be too late to save such a great series not something I wanna spend money on anymore.
I was interested in the time loop type of story. I also want to know what could be at the end. I really like the pacing over the story and that the setting is in Germany. I like the way its paced and how the paragraphs are spaced. Its very easy to read and comfortable to read.
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I just started reading this book and it’s now my number1 favorite. Wow ?, The story is so cool and very descriptive. I recommend this book. Keep it up author ???
The first chapter is an excellent hook. I could see why the people would say the MC is annoying, but he seems like a realistic college student. I'm going to keep up with this story.
