thanks good novel. 2 free chapters please
Great story. Love it. Please keep updating
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
The writer has great storytelling skills. Amazing work ??
Cerita yang menarik dan recomended... seru dan unik ...???Semangat terus ya lanjutin ceritanya..Semangat!!??????☺☺??????
I love this novel ❣? ................................................... ..............................................................................................................................................................
I love the story so far and I'm all cought up, but i need more
Getting better chapters please I need support ??Feel free to comment with you thoughts so I can use it. No bad vibes please? am still learning, and I need motivation ? thanks and I love you all
I have to say.. Wow! I love the character development and the banter! The conversations are so natural and so interesting!! I need more chapters! I need them now!!
Ok I will start with the fact that the concept of the story is kinda interesting. Basically mc becomes a god over a 2d univercancerse of his own creation. Sounds cool, right? Well the problem with this novel is the author has no understanding of science or human biology yet precedes to talk about things like how if everything stopped moving then time would stop or the stupid idea that yoga and eating well will help his cancer. He seems to think controlling the various glands in his body will cure his cancer and wants to make himself taller by making more growth hormone, which wouldn't work at all but would instead give him a problem like enlarged feet or hands and the like. Growth hormones don't make you taller if you are full grown like damn.But of course the journey doesn't end here, beside the authors atrocious understanding of basic science, he loves just summarizing chapters. What do I mean by that? Well I mean a chapter will read like a summary. Little to no detail at all. In the span of a single paragraph he can pick a girl up, have sex, and be home in as little as 4 sentences. Honestly it was the concept of the mc being in control of a new world that got me reading this but this is at best a 2 star novel. The mc is more 2d then the world he controls.The author just ****ting on basic science is what destroys this fucking novel, it would have been a thousand times better if the author came up with a magic reason for his cancer being defeated and why he gets taller and **** instead of trying to use his incredibly limited understanding of the human body to write how the mc plans to make himself better.Read if you have nothing better to do or read. Literally a newspaper is better than this.
A masterpiece in the making. Great storyline so far , a proper plot that develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful.
Putting 5 start because it my book and it's good you should read it. You will find that they things the group of people do does get finished and others do and other parts seem like they are useless but they ain't and you should read it more