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*Spoiler*Pathetic.I just want to vent, at first I enjoyed the story real good and thankful that I found this work.But now the story development became all about making the Ryu(MC) suffer.He suffered all kinds of pain, whether it's psychological, physical, emotional etc. and now the very reason he even committed suicide, that reason where his hope came from, why he gambled his life while not knowing if he'll be qualified with that Sky God Inheritance in his first life and several more who knows how many else he got.His effort was all for a naught because for the sake of story and characters development, nerfed–he became a cultivation cripple and as a bonus his edge on prized bone structure which boasted godly cultivation speed was thrashed to slow down.In the end, I'll never drop reading, maybe I was just fed up after binge reading his continuous suffering.Aside from that, I'll recommend you to read this and following his suffering too.
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I gave this one a chance and read the raws as it was quite entertaining at the start but that is also the best part about it. This novel is just frustrating as disasters to the family keep on happening. Dumb decisions and no character development made me drop this novel. Spoilers:There are enemies around every corner, ancient demons and old immortals trying to devour the baby as nourishment but what do they do, just taking walks around the wilderness, foreign cities and even going to secret realms. Why would u take a 6 month year old baby to an ancient secret realm??? Also he starts talking like a grown up after 6 months, scolding his father and other family members(haha my son is such a genius haha, its normal for him to curse me)150 chapters in and the baby is still just a one year old, so no character growth. He sneaked out so he can go to a secret realm in the north where all other forces are at. For what? To compete with others for resources.He has a system and is a prodigy himself that advances almost every other day, so why cant he just stay at home for a few years and train there instead of courting disaster everywhere he goes
Another good story from the author, waiting for more chapters. currently eager and excited on how this book will turn out and have a great hope for a great story. Nice one Author :).
Lost interest on chapter 118, to many different side character chapters that i basically skipped over them. Not enough MC development chapters like for his sub-class or anything really, which i would rather read about then other (insignificant) character POVs. Who shouldn’t even have so many chapters to begin with.
Good.
Liked it❤Waiting for next part..Looking forward for next partThe story seems very interesting and it can be connected to every person who work like a machineNice story.....?
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Hi there, I am the authoress of this book. If any of the readers are reading this, I would be my pleasure to shameless ask you to give my characters a lot of love.
I think this novel is pretty good... but for some like me who isn't using English as primary language or some who is not good at English. Maybe this is not your taste. I like novels who are always straight to the point and does not have a roundabout or using deep words as narrating a story... I've only read till chapter 3 and my head hurts. But, this novel I think has a good story based on the other reviews!
A very interesting novel. I would recommend it to all readers. It is different, and has a unique way of capturing the minds of the readers. All the best for the author, and keep up the good work
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