This is a great story. 10/10 If you like magic try this one out.
i love the story and i hope its updates comes faster cuz I'm eager to read more ............................................................
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The story just contradicts itself when he gets back home. Their is just no common sense to this book later in the chapters. Sadly a good book has gone wrong in my opinion.
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The previous novels of Ero-Saint, like Hentai System
I expected too much from this novel but all you get is a beta MC. Drop+delete
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
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I loved the way author wrote this story especially the narrative style of the characters and their interactions. I haven't read a story which describes culture and traditions, it is evident that author has done a really good job. The writing quality,the plot build up everything about this story is awesome. Looking forward for more chapters. Keep up the good work author.
Nice interesting story.MC was a doctor before he died by being burned alive due many thought he was dead. So he was cremated (Alive)Thus he goes to hell (Half-aware that he became an abnormal ghost with great strength) And then mysteriously came back to the world of living.Before he disappeared he took a dead body over and gained a wife and was a son-in-law living with the wife's family.Anyway, he owns a bookstore that after a while decided to only open at night? (Not sure)Then somewhere in chapter 30 - 40 he encountered a hell-envoy. The hell envoy was probably tired of his job and thus entrusted (Albeit with a force) to the mc and the mc thus became an envoy of hell.Translation quality: 5 star, nothing wrong with it.-Stability of updates: 5 stars, can't say anything about it cuz trials.-Story development: 4 stars, because of trials but it;s getting better.-Character design: 5 stars, author did pay attention to the design and development even in the first 60 chapters (Although I read to ch 39)-World background: 4 stars, there is somewhat revealed, but for now it's not enough for me to give 5 stars. (Within 39 chapters)