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I feel like I should finally give a review as this is like the second novel I read regularly but I don't really know how to write a review so here we go:1:Translation is great I think though I don't know what the Translation Quality rating is for as I think this was originally written in English but it's good.2:Updating Stability is good most of the time can't really say much else.3:Story Development arc 1 was fun and as a fan of durarara I like different povs.4:Character Design is cool though I feel like more discription would be good.5:world background is probably my favorite part of the story so far since it reminds me of toaru with there being a magic side and a science side.This is the first review I have ever written so it might not be the best I just hope this story gets more exposure.
very interesting n informative book, easy to read
The story is very good and beautifulAnd then every chapter I am waiting for the next one?
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it's not horrible but the author definitely needs to get an editor to go over the chapters. the grammar isn't unreadable but it's still pretty bad.
Scratch my last review..Our great adventurer (ant)Ant-hony under the guidance of his Holy-beard Gandalf, for his Queen and 'less fortunate' brethren (and of course his own curiosity) alongside his trusty Kong, Tiny , delves deeper into the Abyssal depth of Respawnable monsters ( practically a dungeon) to retrieve the treasured cores and irreplaceable Biomass, for further growth and evolution.
MC seems like he is not the MC. Later on when the story develops, he turns into a huge sissy. The amount of novels i've dropped because of how the MC let people trample over him is insane. This novel is no different; it is a such a shame as the theme was really great as a newgame+ type. If only we had a #SissyMC tag.
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Tidak mengecewakan ??? ini menarik, yang tidak aku mengerti kenapa orang-orang bilang ada ntr, sementara yang kubaca tidak ada, itu hanya istri ml yang sedang hamil yang mengalami cobaan berat disaat suaminya pergi selama 1 tahun, si istri membutuhkan sandaran dari tekanan urusan kerajaan & kematian ayahnya, dan kontak fisiknya hanya sebatas ciuman, itu pun cuma sekali lalu she memilih suaminya, suaminya menutup mata terhadap kasus ini karena hanya sebatas ciuman apalagi mengerti penderitaan yang ditanggung istrinya. Ngomong-ngomong novel Age Of Heroes:Novus Gaia tidak ada/tidak dilanjut?
hmmmm it's a good story but im just a little disappointed of the mc his naive as a half dragon my expectation of dragon but still i hope the mc can improve his mindset make the mc caring but at the same time can kill any enemy