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"Woah!" Leora's eyes glitter as she examines the new room. Rows and columns of humanoid robots were hung over one another. There were in total 50 columns vertically(y-axis) and an unending row(x-axis) on both sides. A path spilt in the centre of the humanoid bots.
Lan Ren's gaze nervously swept at his master as he drove the carriage with the fastest speed possible.
Currently, Jamie's face was drenched from tears as she kept on mumbling repeatedly, "Please don't report us... I don't want to become a slave."
He sighed a sigh which held mixed feelings.
She faltered a bit at my reply and hesitated but before she replied the professor and grandpa came back.
Dinner followed and sleep time also arrived. That night, she passed it contemplating the things she had thought earlier and before falling asleep she decided to follow that new path.
Unrealistic, unreasonable, pretentious and annoying ?this book is so annoying, the main reason why is the female lead. They try to portray her in a good way but girl, I'm not having it.. couldn't explain well but you can read the first 10 chapters and you'll get it.the male lead.. oh my god, he is abnormal. this dude falls completely in love with her after she did a few smart things, and he.. is p e r s i s t e n t.this was a waste of time and s few braincells to me. Peace ✌?
"Charles? Why are you here so early?" Sienna asked after she glanced at the clock. It was only seven in the morning.
"No, not yet. I don't want to for now because once you awaken it you have to spend at least seven years in the Elven Capital where you will learn to control your powers as well as choose what profession you want to follow. I did not want to leave because I wanted you to grow up with a brother, and now even more so. I can't leave you alone. Mom and Dad's plan was to try to integrate you into the human society by getting you tested and into a human school but it is too dangerous. They could have found out about who you are and uncovered the entire Elven network in the human kingdoms. Our relationship is strained and could cause a war to erupt if the humans were to find out that we have 'invaded' them, so to speak."
Hi everyone, this is the mandatory & selfish 5-star review from the author. ?I am proud of myself that I have published 20 chapters in this book. Breaking my record for all my previous books. ?And I hope to continue publishing even more chapters as this book is a very ambitious project.The story is an action-adventure story. It will be somewhat slow-paced as I try to build the world and characters. At least I will try my best to do so.This is a harem story. And the world is very dark so I expect a mature mindset when reading it.I am an amateur author. And I write mostly in my free time after work.That's why I request you to help me improve with your constructive criticisms in the comments, reviews, etc.Consider giving me Power Stones once in a while if you feel like it.With such small gestures I can know that my readers like the story I write. It will motivate me to continue writing for you.Thank you.
My honest to goodness review: I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.
Chapter 1 Scenes [ Few scenes still in progress ]
