Honestly the story bis really good, and though it is sometimes cliche, it's able to stand out, what make it even better is the fact it's not a harem story, I'm so tired of those. the story is long enough for you to enjoy it l, with enough mysteries that keep you wanting to know more. At first nothing really happened, the mc never got into fights and it was more mystery after mystery, but now the Mc gets into fights and some mysteries were solved. also each character has at least a background, the only problem is that the you will never learn more about a character you focus some much on yang su, I kinda forget about the others, there is also so much happening in the story so it's hard to tell where the plot is going to go next. I also think that if the author is going to show romance, please don't focus to much on it, because when I read this I want to focus on the action, the story and romance is fine, but when your story is mostly action with no romance and all of a sudden there is a whole chapter dedicated to romance, it feels weird and random. but this is just my opinion, I am but one out of...... a lot.
MC spoils his grandniece so much and that grandniece is someone who he barley met for like 2 days. Oh yh the novel after it hit the 80 years if sign in mark become trash. It become unbearable to read. Going off by the title the MC should be invincible and unrivaled after 80 years but no he not. He is still being lowkey at the same time he is traveling the world. Oh by the way this novel have over 300 chapters and the mc hit the 80 year mark around chapter 125. Im telling yall this so yall wont have to read this used to be good but become trash novel. Trust me i read all 300 plus chapter.
Okay heres my 2 cents on this LN after pushing my way through reading pass the 800 chapters mark. A word of warning to those new readers on this LN.DONT SPEND YOUR SS ON THIS MEDIOCRE LN!!Its not worth it!! (Search for it for free rather paying ss for it. Why? Cuz the translator keep doing mistakes and didnt even bother to proof read, somewhat suddenly the mc i.q suddenly began to downgrade even after hundreds of years of life experiance, the visible force plot on this LN and some other stuff. ) Those ss we get and pay are used for deserving quality LN not some mediocre LN like this. In addition to the translator who doesnt care for his/her work quality.
I got it wrong in my previous comment (thought it was a shop novel, at least not yet), but I have to sayyy: It's really good!!! You can clearly see it was edited (unlike those other novels), other than Barett's name changing to Brett sometimes (which is not really bothering), there's no problem. The story is really funny aswell, had a good laugh in the early chapters. I recommend it!
It’s gooooood??????Finally decent system novel set in modern times Wish there were more chapters up ?I humbly request a small mass release of about 100-200 chapters. We’d all appreciate it... Master Translator ?P.s I’m not a bot so you can trust this is not a fake review
Let me start with a warning: this novel needs NTR warning (or NTR tag). Beware! Read at your own risk!As for review:This novel is not very consistent. Author tries to mix stuff that doesnt mix well. Really dark stuff (torture, rape, NTR, etc.) mixed together with some immature joke usually ends up awkward.Also characters are very shallow. They just get one superficial characteristic and they act only based on that. You cant find any deeper motivation. Like this guy is cruel, another is greedy, this girl is arogant, etc. Even main character is very shallow. He remembers his past life and has many life experiences and yet he usually acts like a little brat without any care.Also whole world is mumbo jumbo mess that doesnt make much sense. It looks like author didnt put much thought into it when he created it. I dont recommend reading this.
personally i feel that this novel has its own uniqueness to it. there are few books with this genre and the layout of the plot is well done. the characters are fleshed out and have personalities. the interactions between characters are smooth and have no feelings of rigidness of a script or forced convos to continue the plot.its a bit slow in terms of plot progression but it keeps itself paced. i would reccomend the novel for good leisure read. would i say its great?....maybe.....maybe. it has potential but I'll have to wait till ch.100 to decide that. (author, when you reach 100, do remind me to edit this review)all in all its solid with no plot holes or overly used cliches.
This story has a loot of potential the only thing is the story has a very slow update speed. PS NNNNNNNNNNNNeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEd more
I read it on radiant and I must Say , this is one of the best novel on qidan. You Can feel the growth of the mc from an ignorant young master to a merciless Killer. The novel have plots and schemes , politics , War , assasination , revenge , drama and a lot of others stuffs . Betrayals are common and people hearts change. In the end , you can only trust yourself. Anyway , it s a story that needs to be read in the long run. It ll probably not be to the taste of people not used to read real books or people that Can t assimilate "a lot of informations". I must Say , in Books liké that there will Always bé people who complain about the lack of things happening but those people are probably not used to read Books . For those who want a story with good worldbuilding and with I mentionned in my first paragraph , I definitely reccomend it. Follow our mc in his quest for revenge and more. There is no cheat grandpa here and nothing that ll help him becoming op quickly and easily.
And here I am again still reading. Finally some answers in the latest chapters. The plot is getting more and more interesting. Writing quality have also increased.
An excellent wrap-up to a compelling story with gripping fights and heartwrenching plotlines. I loved Zaos, Ameria, Aleni, The Bloody Knights, and all the other characters that we followed along with. Thank you for the thought and effort to keep the quality of the story good all the way through.
Slowly reading this hidden gem and this hidden gem should be uncovered and shown to the world! This novel borders on realism and the characters inside are deeply fleshed and some of them are very relatable.This novel hits every genre as well. It hits comedy, action, romance and even slice of life etc. It needs a bit more action to be honest but the world-building and the interactions make it fun. There are a few dark scenes that would make your breathing stagger and a lot of funny scenes that would make your nose exhale or laugh out loud. 5 stars!