i'm getting pretty tired of finding what seems to be a good story,but they have locked chapters i have to pay to read.
i got this FREE app to read interesting,not pay for literally 70% of it
sigh. sorry for the rant,i needed to say SOMETHING
since i cant read it ill just give three stars to get my review out there
An excellent read this is great work, I love it keep working hard love your work. Keep it up Author and update more chapters soon, great job, I highly recommend your novel .
.....honestly while reading this novel you would get the impression that it is a mash-up of different novels the difference is that the MC is not have an average appearance but below average downright ugly which is emphasized by the author time and time again and fast relationship intimacy progress, novels like "villainess butler", "eminence in the shadows", otome games is tough for mobs" and 4 more but I forgot the titles.
the the story is kind of mishmash of those novels in order to create an original, writing have more to be desired, idiot readers who can't undeunderstand or read a story with grammatical errors would be stumped.
well at least gender distinction is clear.
the world building is good.
character design... is he a 30 year old in a teen body or a teen body wiwith the 30 year old memories, cause you know, his behavior is kinda, ヽ￣へ￣ノ.
story development is .. . well, reasonable.
Good story. Much better than the ones we usually get in this webnovel dump. But the English is terrible here. I had easier time reading Chinese machine translation novels than this one. If the author can get an editor this novel can be a success
Okay, no romance but I love this book keep it up author love your work, great job for jotting this down !! Love the characters and the description keep this up, I highly recommend this novel.
GOOD You are back!!!
I really liked your previous work Solo player Arvin...
So I anticipate big things from this book too...
Don't disappoint me...
Delia Ketchum est la mère de Sacha Ketchum dans Pokémon, la série. Elle est un personnage récurrent qui apparaît depuis le premier épisode de la sérieContrairement à ce qui est dit dans la version anglaise, elle n'a pas gagné le concours de beauté de l'épisode censuré La beauté et la plage (annulé suite aux événements déclenchés par la Team Rocket), mais a conservé le trophée.C'est elle qui a fait tous les habits de Sacha (qu'il change tous les cycles).Sacha a offert son trophée de la Ligue Orange et celui du Battle Frontier à sa mère, ainsi que celui de la Ligue Indigo Elle rend souvent visite au Professeur Chen, comme on peut le voir dans le deuxième et le troisième film, ainsi qu'une paire d'épisodes souvent en fin de cycle lors des ligues.À noter qu'elle regarde beaucoup les ligues de son fils.
If you like house of horror and the Lord of Mystery there is no need to further read this review quickly go and read this novel you won't regret it. So far I've read the first 39 so this is my review of it, READ AND VOTE don't let this Hidden Gem go to waste.
Well the story is written pretty nicely. It binds the reader with story urging them to think what's next will be there in story for them. The characters bulid up is also great with their skills. Overall the apoloclyps theme is well suited too . There is not much grammatical errors which is nice again but I feel there is too much information and explanation give.You could just casually describe a character or a scene without adding additional details . No doubt story has great potential
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Liked the story up until now.....Can't wait to see more chapter!
My only hope for the novel is to not adhere to the usual xianxia tropes and cliches and be something different,