Another bland OP MC novel. If you came for the farming you will be disappointed as it is mainly about the MC getting rewards and traveling to a poorly explained other world. There is no character or wolr development. The MC just gets rewards and understands things with no explanation of how he knows it.I made it to chapter 18 and had to stop as it was just too bland. Like eating plain rice for 7 days straight.Translation quality is decent though.Dont waste your time on this because....
I just don't like the MC, supposedly he was always fighting in wars while in his second world, but now he gives his enemies a slap on the wrist and lets them go. Feels a bit too bland for my liking.
after 40 chapters turns utterly bitterly stupid .... rarely uses sytem .. copied everything from MARTIAL WORLD.. even dialogue, circumstances, villan and his back story, powers ... almost everything is copied ... that is why there is mass release .. just copy paste with very few changes ...
Amazing! The storyline is captivating every step of the way. My breath was caught in my throat as I read each chapter in anticipation. I love how strong and mature the characters are...just bravo!
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The author managed to build a very solid world, the scenarios are well described, I was captivated by the author's writing style, the mystery surrounding the ML and how the stiry unfolds as I read more. So far my advice would be to try reducing some paragraphs.
I hope that you dont make the same mistake which a novel very similar to this,the epic of butterfly did by involving the family and kids too much into the story where mc gives them her benifits and they leech off mc everywhere.Make the mc explore the world and explore the system
Hello, the author here, shamelessly giving a 5 star review, because just as how Rei thinks of herself as perfect, what kind of mother wouldn't think her child is perfect?
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250 chapters in
Have to say the novel is unique for the a cultivation novel and that the author has put a good amount of thought into the plot for the story. The first 50 chapters are good but at the same time rough they serve a important part to the story but reading the perspective of a mc thats just getting abused the whole time did for me get a bit annoying and felt like it was going on for to long. after that for around 100 chapters story was pretty good and can say I enjoyed what I read, But as I started closer to around the 200 chapter mark I started disliking things with the plot more and more having to do with the mc. Mc cultivation progress is moving at a snails pace, he keeps getting stronger with being able to cross more realms to fight others but his actual cultivation grade hardly changes. He starts training in multiple area's before really ever mastering what he was already working on specially when he decideds to train in very unconventional paths like duel weilding spears, halberts and glaives. Took the mc hundreds of years to fully accept his relationship with his first wife. He acts coldly to someone that tells him they have been waiting for him for hundreds of millions of years and that you are there life partner. But yet he sits in the wrong seat in hall and suddenly decides he needs to take responsibility for a girl just a chapter earlier he was deciding on to take revenge on there clan or not like tf?
Also author if you see this you should add a introduction chapter or in the summary of the novel explaining cultivation ranks I still don't know them. Saw comments about you saying just go to a wiki of rise rising and risen to see the stages in order but I couldn't find anything going over cultivation ranks,there was hardly any information posted on the wiki.
I have read the book till chapter 40 and here is what i want to point out...... Many author's promise to give powerstone bonuses and dont! My respect to you author san for fullfilling the powerstone bonus promise on the same day as the target is reached every single week .
The author actually listens to the readers comments and replies accordingly, even the plot takes a different turn if the viewers are not satisfied , listening to the audience is a big plus for me , as it makes me feel connected and valued ....... Giving a 200 coin gift to you for this