There is no way people actually like this, it doesn’t even make any sense. The mc emotions and personality seem so unrealistic.
The first thing I see a cover that needs some working, I am sure you could use an AI program to make your work stand out and more attractive, the synopsis could use some work to draw your users in. *Please note I only want to help you get better as I only seek to better my fellow writers* The beginning pages are very short, WN goes by 1.5k to 1.6k depending so I assume you are a new author, but it is interesting I hope you continue to do what you love.
Very good world development and engrossing storyline
I love this novel. It’s one of the good ones of this platform but that’s the problem. IT’S TOO GOOD. I want more but I’m poor so I can’t buy coins for chapters. I can only unlock 3 chapters a day via adds so please I beg you add more free chapters For those who are asking why and how is this novel good well firstly the Mc is likeable(in my opinion) and the character interactions don’t feel awkward or strained to me. Also where I’m at (chapter 71) all characters actually have a brain in issues and it’s not a problem that can be solved easily that will be prolonged for idk struggle even though it really isn’t. Back to the point there are issues that can’t be solved with simple solutions.Sorry if this didn’t really make sense going to sleep soon. Last message give more free chapters I beg you.
Well the idea is nice and the start of the story was great but then it just started reading like a lab report.. even some chapters later on when the MC was “planning” out his training plans read like an abstract of a thesis. That was annoying but it’s not the reason I dropped the novel, what really ticked me off is how everyone (and I mean everyone from the orphans to the leaders of the nation) somehow always talk with great logic and points of validity.I wouldn’t be surprised if the author chose the scientific track when they were in high school but bro, that’s not how you write a novel.
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I really like this , the development of the story was really good and was definitely worth reading, look forward to finding something similar to read
Honestly I don’t like the Mc. I don’t like the characters and just straight up I am put off by this story. I didn’t like library of heaven’s path and don’t like this. It’s generic and the personality of the Mc is not suited to this at all, I hate that this is picked by the trial read when this is one of the trashiest novels here. I don’t recommend this but since it’s chosen anyway give it a shot, You might like it but I most significantly don’t.
A story worth spending coins.....the characters to the dual world setting (vr and real) is amazing. Yeah in the starting chapter Janus was quite annoying but everything he did was due to a reason so the one de
dropping it due that reason... you're missing something too amazing
Im putting 5 stars just for the idea of this novel. And looking at the few coments i read i don't think i will change this review after reading this.