Re: Desolate Era (Naruto X DE)

I got totally addicted to this book!! Can't wait to read what will happen with Aurora, Henry, Penelope and Bishop. Please,  keep it going, you're doing such a great job....️...️...️

Well the idea is nice and the start of the story was great but then it just started reading like a lab report.. even some chapters later on when the MC was “planning” out his training plans read like an abstract of a thesis. That was annoying but it’s not the reason I dropped the novel, what really ticked me off is how everyone (and I mean everyone from the orphans to the leaders of the nation) somehow always talk with great logic and points of validity.I wouldn’t be surprised if the author chose the scientific track when they were in high school but bro, that’s not how you write a novel.

An incredible story that is so historically accurate, I can't help but applaud the author. It is also humbling to read this story as it inspires me to be a better writer. Think about it: this story has a lot of historical facts and explanations and yet I, someone who passed my history test with a below average score, was drawn in. It never felt cluttered or boring and was rather engaging, a testament to not only how good the author is in writing, but how much effort he put in to make this compelling story.The characters are also well done and fleshed out and the action scenes are also great. Antonius is a character I can get behind; he is scheming but has a sense of honor. Abdullah is another character that I admired; I thought he would be one of those arrogant characters in webnovels that are there just for face slapping but was pleasantly surprised when I found him to be just as smart as Antonius. Grammar is also well done, just a few errors here and there but they hardly affect the story. As I mention in my reviews, there are stories with horrendous grammatical errors that are more popular than these hidden gems and make no mistake, this is a hidden gem.

The crowd is so gullible. It’s almost as though the author isn’t even trying to make them resemble regular human beings that are capable of independent thought. The average scenario I’ve read so far seemed to flow like this:“He’s so shameful, hehe haha.” -Villain 1“Omg, so shameful. Look at him, haha.”  -Crowd“Nah.” -MC“Ah~ Let’s have a baby!!” -Crowd

Writing Quality ★• It's a complete copy of a copy of a copy of a copy of a slight original of an original novel with the same plot. Just a pervert well not exactly a pervert but you get my point of him only looking for female disciples with the synopsis alone.Story Development ★• It's just the same story with completely different name of some novels with disciple cashback/return system.Character Design ★• I already mentioned it, a copy of a copy of a....Updating Stability ★ ★  ★ ★ ★• No complain hereWorld Background ★• Just an expanding set of world starting from the MC's sect to the other region, to a continent, to another world, etc...

it's backkkkkkkkk, Yesssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************