Hale smiled.
Then, Kakashi called out Sasuke, Naruto, and Sakura's name, bringing them away. Huh?
Her feet definitely would taste good wouldn't' they?
- "It's a long story..."- said Finn not knowing where to start- "so I'll tell you the plan first..."
You are the only author who is actively working on sharing novel. Keep it up. One day people will remember your name and work.
worth a read.........................................................................................................................................................................................
3 chapters in. so far, it's like By the Grace of the Gods meets Banished from the Hero's Party. I think anyone who likes those will like this one.
I was hoping for something good based on the ratings ... alas, chapters 1-3 were pretty bad. Writing quality and language were the biggest issues for me and they made me drop this within 3 chapters. The author jumps between tenses and generally has issues with sentence structure and coherence. It almost feels like something machine-translated at times.
This story is about beginnings. Not the dramatic, world-shattering kind—though the mist certainly qualifies—but the quiet, stubborn kind that happens when two people who've lost everything decide to figure out what comes next together. The mist is the obvious symbol, of course. It hits humans and turns them into walking corpses, but plants and animals 'actually benefited from it.' Xia Ruxi understands something the rest of the world hasn't grasped yet: this isn't an apocalypse, it's a transformation. 'Flora and fauna were starting to gain spiritual awareness.' The world isn't ending; it's molting. And the people who survive won't be the strongest or the most armed—they'll be the ones who can adapt, who can see opportunity where everyone else sees disaster. Then there's the Cleaving Vine, which is honestly one of the most thematically loaded objects I've encountered in recent reading. It attacks Xia Ruxi, tries to kill her, and she defeats it and immediately starts thinking about how useful it is—as a wound-healing herb and as an ingredient for repairing spiritual mansions. The vine that tried to destroy her becomes the tool that helps her rebuild. That's not just clever world-building; that's the entire thesis of the story in miniature form. The world that tried to kill everyone is now the source of everything they need to survive. And Pei Yuanxiu himself—'he had already examined himself the night before; apart from the new injuries, even old hidden ailments from the past had healed completely. Alongside his shock, he had also noticed some kind of presence lingering in his chest and abdomen.' He doesn't know it yet, but he's been given a spiritual mansion. The man who was hunting survivors is about to become something entirely new. The old world order is being reshuffled, and the symbols keep appearing: the vine, the bullet, the mist, the storage ring with its two halves—one organized, one blank and waiting. Nothing is finished here. Everything is becoming.
In the beginning of the story the mc starts off outside a town called ruric and like a week later two siblings become adventures so then the mc babysits them during the rest of volume 1, volume 2 the mc got a request to help train the dukes daughter cause she couldn't control her magic so when the mc goes there the daughter doesn't even come out of her for at least 2/3 days later on in volume 2 there was a mini army of wolves that the mc knew about but didn't tell the Duke cause he wanted the exp which resulted in all his summons dieing temporarily and him being hurt and then they regard him as a hero just cause he fought them instead of being reprimanded for being reckless and volume 3 is the reason I dropped the story because the author introduced a female reincarnated person which turns out the world he is in is a time game and then he finds out there's over 1200 other reincarnaters other than him a chunnibuyo wannabe hero and a otome game mc which is the reason I dropped it
I have read a few chapters.. the storyline progresses quickly.. the author's English is good enough to understand and even use describing words. However, many of those describing words are placed in awkward places of the sentences. I also wish there was more description on everything.. the setting, the characters.. etc. Good luck, author, please continue your hard word and improve your English.
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