The writing style of the author is kinda jarring, the sentences don't flow and there are times where I need to reread a sentence. It disturbs my reading immersion and just lowers the quality of the novel. Idk about you guys but the grammar and just the way an author writes sentences plays a big part in my reading experience, hence why I rated this low. I'm also rating this lower just to balance the rating of the novel since I've noticed that most of the reviews aren't proper reviews at all.