The Alfan nodded and gave him the device, which he inserted into his ear.
"Good. Keep me up to date on any new information." I reply before turning to Jota.
Walking across to the other side, he descended down the steps hidden to even John's sharp eyes. You had to know what you were looking for. At the bottom of the steps was a door with an ornate mask nailed to where a knocker should have been. He knocked twice.
Wan then took out his bike from the inventory and rode off.
Tora proceeded to position one of her hands onto Kyouka's middle back, while her other hand was at the back of her head.
Nothing like she had expected. It was a large wooden room with a bed in the far right, taking up a fourth of the room.
It's not because I felt you were too hard on me. By all means, continue to criticize all you want, it's better for everyone that way. It was just very rough to come back from the dead cat to see that sort of comment. That was all I meant by "this comment is hard on me." I'm fine with those any other day, I didn't feel troubled at all, just heavy if that makes sense.My question wasn't meant to sound aggressive, I was genuinely curious to know who you were gunning for. Everyone has their own they fit would be best together. Who knows, maybe I could have heard some unexpected name? Brenia and Zoran best pair XD.I understand your criticism about harems because I do feel the same whenever I read that sort of story. None of the characters get enough screen time to get well developed and everyone end up like cardboard images of pretty love interest rather than actual characters. On top of that, all of them just get along magically, no way this can happen (unless actual magic but that's cheating). I have no idea if I'm talented enough to fix that problem. I will try my best but like I said, I'm bad at relationships because I never had one myself, I can only guess. Maybe the solution would be a lot of side chapters from the POV of everyone else, like the one on Calla and Zoran, show that there is more going on than just what Emp finds important.
"As you wish, my Lord."
Jens : "There's another one?"
It really was
It's been almost 4 months, so I supposed it's time for me to write a review and let you all know what you're supposed to expect and not to expect in this novel.1. Is this a heavy sci-fi element? Yes, it's meant to be a heavy sci-fi element, but if you haven't seen much of it yet, then please do be patient about it. I'm writing hard to develop things slowly and not just speed run or write hastily which could ruin the storyline.2. Is the novel going to be about Mechanic? Yes, the main character, Shi Tian, also known as Nathan (alias), is a mechanic and more detailed explanation and aspect regarding the mechanic path would be explained as you gradually read more.3. World building/info dumping? Yes and no, the world is still being constructed despite having 200chs+ already. I don't like to simply write a whole chunk of text filled with the world and info dumping, but gradually revealed them bits by bits, allowing the readers to digest the information.4. Action-packed? Definitely, what kind of sci-fi doesn't have action packed? Keep in mind that the action/fighting would be different than most novels, given it's a Sci-fi, so weapons are advanced and might not even exist (at least in this current era), so don't attempt to go "how is this possible" or "that's impossible" on technologies that seemed far-fetched.5. Romance Element? Currently not the main focus of the novel, so don't expect to see lovely-dovey moment or cute moment. There would be interactions between the Main character and numerous female characters, but the number will be kept in a ratio similar to the Main character interaction with other male characters.6. I seemed to have read this kind of novel before... If you have this sense of deja vu, then you aren't wrong if you have read "The Legendary Mechanic" novel before. This novel is inspired from it, so there are elements that are similar, but the plotline is completely different.TLDR: Thank you for reading the novel, and I hope you enjoyed it. If you have any questions, feel free to comment below, but note, I might not give a clear answer for your questions depending on what it is.
I've only read four chapters and I am sure to follow up.I love Kione's way of frustrating Olivia to her limits..keep updating and I'll keep reading❣️