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sadly it is so badly Written/Translatet it realy is a shame . the Speech with the "...." makes no Sense and you get 0 clue what a Person is saying .Sorry mate maybe rewrite or use Better Translator
A book that might be a bit wonky sometimes, but I will try my level best to improve as it goes on. Hopefully, I will be able to give you something that is worth reading by the end of it.
I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read. , As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don’t lose money. Don’t wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?
Reading through the lastest chapter (511) Everything is good except the repettitive sentence or paragraph At first in the early chapter which i didnt remember the exact chapter, it has a one or two repetitive sentenceI do not mind it since everyone can make some minor mistake But later the mistake keep growing until the chapter 507The repettive in this chapter reach to the point that i cant take any of this anymoreThe content in chapter 507 is nothing except it copy every sentence from chapter 506 and paste it on chapter 507, Everything is the sameAlso the lastest chapter for now (511) has the same mistake as other chapter but not much as chapter 507Some people already told me that they had infrom cutomer service about this but i see no progress about this at allThis author is completely a gold digger as the chapter in this novel is very expensive from a massive word count from repetitive sentenceSo i recommend this book but DO NOT spend your money on thisIT IS NOT WORTHps. Sorry for bad english
Our MC loves to study and gets a system that forces him to relax in order to learn. It starts off nice, but slowly stereotypes and misunderstandings appear. The pacing is decent, but it is just not for me, but give it a go
Honestly, I’ve been struggling to find a novel that has less than 100 chapters written to hold my interests. This novel is definitely able to do just that. I definitely recommend you give it a try! The word count per release is pretty decent unlike some novels on the top charts *cough* it shouldn’t take me two minutes to read a chapter (how are you supposed to make it into a book?!) *cough* Anyways I digress. It’s an overall well written novel that will suck you in. We’ve yet to see much of the system so that’s still up in there air but I’m expecting great things! Keep up the great work author and don’t skimp on that word count ;)
I am really gonna be enjoying this bookThanks author Finally got what I needed to dispel xiantain from my system
you're going down here right now, there's too much smut and not enough story. this is starting to turn into a crack fit.
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There has never been a book that has induced so much anger into me. The writing and characters are ok, I just don't really like where the plot is going. There are a few holes/places where it was forced. Overall pretty good, but it just doesn't strike the right note with me, other people may like it and I respect that, but I don't.