hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
good story. liked it from the start.keep up the good work...............,.....................,...........................................
my old review was deleted (I think I gave like 2.7 stars) this time I will not take an hour of my time to write an in-depth review. Why should I? This story is bad and it is getting worse over time, earlier chapters (until 100) are pretty good and promising. But at some point the author has stopped trying to write a good story and focused on writing as much as possible. The focus shifted to earning money which is TOTALLY FINE. But he sadly disregarded proofreading and story telling which is NOT FINE.
Your quality of writing and story development are magnificent, congratulations. The world background was also well crafted and masterfully developed.
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Only 7 chapters in and it's already becoming one of my favourite stories.The only thing where this story lacks is in the proper structuring of words and sentences but there, I can't blame the author as they are working without any editor and as the apology chapter says, English is not their first language.The story is magnificently written so far. I can already see a lot of themes like depression, loneliness, insecurity, despair, societal prejudices, parental themes, abuses, possessiveness and a lot more to come.Characters are extremely great so far. I can see all of them getting attention and focus and for me, characters matter the most!Symbolism are also excellent and properly used. Keep up the great work.
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It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out.Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out!Good luck!
I really enjoyed every chapter from start till chapter 110. I can’t say the same for most of the stories I read. Thank you author.Please don’t drop.
Update more chapter AUTHOR!! I really like this novel so please dont drop this thing :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
I, Lord 7th, really enjoy this novel. It's really too good to be on Webnovel. My favorite aspect of the novel is how it switches to different characters of the novel. This set the mystery of the MC. Who thought we know well in the beginning, but the more time we spend away from him. The more time we wonder what changes about him. Did we truly know him from the beginning? Is he even the main character?Plus the story is named after my brother so I decided to read it.
Didn't I just read this (jk)..Where is the Dark Demon Dragon King..