KelvinSekwati
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An extremely interesting story.
Extremely perfect way of writing and describing.
An amazing job.I love it immensely. Great work author. This story is just incredible.
Good starting.but then it starts getting boring when it gets repetitive.mc does not think of any plan and just starts killing. And so he behaves like an idiot.
Nice Nice Nice ! Keep the excellent work and please add more chapter's in the future, i''d like to hear more from you and the Title Picture/Image is good all the Quality, Story Development, and i'd like also to suggest to add more background in the future that's for all . Nice Novel!
A hubby that is very protective????????????????????????????????????????????
Webnovel butchering more novels. Tranlation is bad, and the translators are adding in plot points that don't exist in the original work. If you are wondering why they are using carriages and carrying things manually despite the MC 'having a spacial storage ring,'it's because the ring and the knight profession book don't exist in the actual work.
This novel has potential.It develops characters and has no sudden forced plot.Tha author has improved a lot from the beginning as I know because I was reading this book from the beginning .Keep Going
What was that! I couldn't breath. Did he die or you are generating a super hero. It is not usual to have a real time background like this. The synchronization the real world with the super beings, this is cool, man! Publish more, more and more please!!!
A very interesting story about virtual reality. Would definitely recommend for all readers. Nice plot, and storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter. All the best for the author.
I'm only 20 chapters in but I find it to be quite funny and it's so full of fluff and cuteness it's giving me diabetes, I know the setting is supposed to be in a apocalypse like world but while reading I sometimes forget that due to the interaction between both the main leads. Keep up the great work author and I hope you'll continue to upload more funny and fluffy chapters of this masterpiece, though the English isn't the best and there are sometimes errors in between the paragraphs it is still acceptable (at least to me but I don't know for other people). Once again, keep up the great author, I'm cheering for you!!!
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I’ll get straight to the point: Don’t waste your time. There are so many problems with this book.
First, the quality control is terrible. There are repeated chapters and the chapters aren’t even the same. It seems like the author had multiple drafts of some of the chapters and posted all of them. There are also basic issues with grammar and spelling, though it’s not the worst I’ve seen on the app.
Second, the system is ridiculous. The MC gets points for doing even the most basic things and the levels weren’t well thought out. He basically reaches advanced or master level after leveling once. And as I said before, he gets points for doing the most basic things, like mastering all his school subjects by flipping through books or just interacting with an A student.
He also masters cooking just by chopping some vegetables, which is another ridiculous thing. After that happens, the rest of the chapters so far becomes about his cooking skills and the fruit juice he made based on one of the many recipes he got from the system after leveling up once.
The author obviously doesn’t know anything about cooking or wine, yet more than half the chapters are about the MC’s cooking or the juice he made, which tastes like red wine.
Also, if you have suffered or are suffering from an eating disorder, then definitely skip this, because the author introduces an anorexic character who’s “cured” thanks to the MC’s drink, and it’s very obvious that the author knows nothing about anorexia or eating disorders.
