KelvinSekwati
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I have a feeling about something that is being hinted in the novel but I don't want to spoil, if are here to read reviews so you can start the novel... well my review is that the novel is perfect for a first time author.
just another garbage mtl... not worth anyones time
The story is good, author please don't drop it. On that note, you can try reading (Just like a dream).
180+ chapters in and here is my review starting with mc who is extremely stupid sometimes arrogant and sometimes he thinks everything should be according to his will and he is also somewhat ungrateful . even though author emphasized many time that I lost count that he is mature in the story believe me he is not and if u say that he is only 14 yrs old and he has to be naive than stop calling him mature every other chapter bcz the life he had led should have made our mc mature but it only made him stupid. even though the mc has determination and he is hard-working I really dislike his thought process in many situations be it regarding his second soul bond be it regarding the time he had to endure pain while creating sub space or be it while taking others advice which he never takes bcz he is smart than others I guess this is what he thinks it looks like that to me don't know about others but yeah his thought process makes me think of him not as mc but your typical young masters. the only thing mc ever did not so stupid would be choosing artemis and i like that owl
it doesn't make sense why this novel has such a high rating, the characters' personalities keep changing, they are not consistent, the main character is simply a failed attempt at a villainous character. in short, this novel is subpar.
This is superb! I love transmigration, fantasy, action, and adventure stories. This one is such a complete package! The game like setting and the system were additions that got my interest the most. I like the MC, though he was thrown in a different world without any warning, still he remained strong. The plot is amazing. Looking forward for more.
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Translation sucks.......character design sucks....... won't even understand anything......even mtl is better than this translation..........
Are you a lost reader? I bet you're handsome or pretty. Read this novel if you are. Otherwise, read it twice. Don't believe me? Read it thrice.
Honestly, a great story. The characters are well developed, the wording is impeccable, the story is engaging, and I can't wait for more!
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