Okay I haven’t read much, but the grammer is very hard to understand and most sentences don’t seem to connect well. From up to chapter 2 and the limited knowledge I have due to the grammer it looks good. But I do hope that if the grammer improves I’ll come back!
Has potential, and is a _unique idea, and you seem dedicated and passionate about it, but I think some modifications are needed:
1. Add some relevant tags. Almost no one on this platform is gonna read something that doesn't have at least a few tags. besides the platform won't push and spread it out if you don't set it.
2. I can't differ which text is for the system and which text is the narrative; I mean put the system on a format like a common one is just putting the system commands or prompts or status between '[ 'system' ] or something like that.
keep it up!
Respected author Kota, that was some damn read!
The cover = OG
The beggining= OG
The character= OG
The setting= OG
Story Development= OG
A 5-star deserving story of course!
Therefore, best of luck on creating more chapters for us!
As far as I've read (7 chapters), the novel is incredibly grippy and captivating. I am extremely expectant about this novel due to this. So yeah, if anyone is reading this, do give it a try.
I loved to read the story - and appreciate that it was never dragging on.
Inspiring romantic story gripping you won’t stop reading till you hear the next chapter
Beautiful storyline, I really enjoyed reading it
good read, nice story
Perfect ...️ like drama tv. I'm so annoyed with the behavior of that old lady, Savana!!!
Will read this soon
I really loved the stories so much! heck..I read it all in a day and half nonstop: -) and I can't get enough of the 7 gold life both parents and children...
I miss read it says free but I'm getting charged for the next chapter????