I'm so sad. It was so good. The first 352 chapters are a fairly "original" take on the give disciples things get stronger genre. It was fun and I greatly enjoyed reading it. HOWEVER, from chapter 353 it is a copy and paste of "The Most Generous Master Ever". Blatantly. There are only small changes like names and some references to his past disciples and his system.
the writing quality is extremely shotty at times that's the biggest flaw and by far the most consistent which takes away from readability...
This story reminds me of 'Reincarnated as a fox with a system' written by godadi thought with an owl and a different story.
17 chapters in and it’s a great start. Character development between the MC and FMC is growing slowly but surely. This book is written and edited by the author, it’s very easy to understand the writing, nothing too complex but just the way you’d like it. World building is probably coming along, we’re just 17 chapters in so it’s a bit early to point out stuff however, I’d say give this book a try since it has a familiar yet unique and new plot you might have not seen before. ??
It has only 2 chapters but it looks good. please post more!⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️⚔️??????????⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚⌚.....
Never knew being a ghost could be so fun. There is alot of smut in this story. It takes a unique path into accomplishing all these 18+ scenes. However, this ruins the pacing of the story and has multiple chapters dedicated to a single scene. I do enjoy the new direction you taking currently that made up for the lacking plot. I only wish you'd update.
This is a great book. i find myself so intrigued in the story as i am reading that i look a the time one min its say 1pm the i look again to find it's 5pm. the story is aslo well thought out and each characters have well defined personalitys and description that you can seen it in your imagination.
I want more chapters
Inspired by Hyde Park in London, the park, which is dotted with palms, acacia trees, and tropical foliage, is considered as one of the few "green" areas in Makati.
I'm here again to explain everyone the greatness of the Heaven and the Earth *hmm I that was the line* :So a great story where mc gains a system in game evolve in various monsters (even Divine beasts) or by transmutation to from new species for his minions and for himself and h gets a lottery system where gets good skills and even Divine skills ( Ch 11 or 12).So read bro/sis so when it not in your hand you don't regret it...
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