If the dungeon ever gets a revamp I think it would be cool to have style transition floors that make sence like the castle, for example you could do a mining cave -> mining cave -> underground pool leading to an water themed level (beach, underwater, whatever) transition to a jungle/forest -> dead forest area -> dealands/desert -> volcano -> mountains -> snowy mountains -> cloud area
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btw, anyone know how many chapters overall?
This is my first time reading a novel that focuses on history. I like how unique it is in so many aspects, and I think readers would enjoy this. Give it a try!
Very nice story, we will follow Tom a mortal at the start to reach the peak!The character seems very interesting keep it up.The writing is nice and story has a lot of potential as he travels
It’s good so far, but you should definitely revisit your work, several mistakes, such as words repeating, commas in wrong places, overall it’s good, just pay more attention to your work to limit mistakes.
Really loving the book so far! Only early days so we don't have a whole lot of general world building, but we do have a lot of localized world building and I love that we're learning along with the MC about what's happening. I'm glad you haven't jumped straight to the MC getting betrayed by everything because that is a really overused plot device and while it works....it's not the best to see it in every other book lol *Spoiler*I am worrying though about how they're going to handle getting every skill to level 5 if they keep getting more new skills and personally I would've immediately attempted to clear the 5 dungeons since they're getting a new skill every-time but is what it is. The could potentially just save the skills papers for after the 4 months? Idk how reliable that would be though. They really do need to focus on farming these skills though, I would be using them every second I could! lol
Wow, this is really really interesting and the novel's description was really good.
lmao
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I knew it was trash the moment I saw its acronym was STSBOTAFTG
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at this point just give the aconym an aconym...
I like the stpry but there are two mood points.
One is the wordpadding, the story gets streched till its breaking point. At some points of time I skipped multiple pages, because the author just kept repeating himself.
The other mood point is the regressing translation quality. After chapter 60-80 the quality takes a noticable dive. Translations for specific things get changed multiple times per chapter, words that don't seem to belong into sentenced and many more. It feels like the typical MTL errors that were forgotten to correct. A shame because at least 80 percent of those errors could have been corrected by simply reading through chapter once more before releasing.
If you want to read something that is intense, mysterious and humourous at the same time, this story is perfect! I enjoyed reading and how the intense from the first part switch to something humorous and fun to the next part. And every chapter is worth it since there will be slight mystery between scenes that will hook you more into the story. I love this!♥️
Great start to a good novel. please pick and update
For anyone that reads this know that this is amazing, very good pacing, great character interactions and natural development of relationships.
A lot of writing techniques that can be copied, I mean learned from this