I love this story! MC is excellent and love the no hero complex and is evil but not villain, just out for himself. Writing quality definitely needs work. I’m confused half the time and have to reread sentences atleast twice since grammar is way off. But I really want to know if you’re still going to finish? I never see updates and have been waiting ages. I have reread multiple times but I want it finished atleast. Killing me with no ending and how slow is updating. Are you still working on this story?!
Ano ano ba ipapaprint saanunsyo ilan ba yung teacher and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there
It's finally got released....
Characters are well defined...
Story development so far that is till 9 chapter...is very good...?
Keep up the good work ..??
And please update regularly...??
The story is promising for a sci fiction and there are light humor too. Author english is better than most of the stories around here. Readers should give this awesome story a chance as it has colorful characters and you will feel immerse into it.
yet another wish fulfillment novel. From what i understood from the first 10 chapters that i read is this novel has Op mc with quick level ups and random encounter. There is no thinking from the author just his wish fulfillment. This novel is only fir novice readers and will surely become untolerable after maybe 100 or 200 chapters.
another system novel. time to dig in. I hope this one won't let me down and the author keeps on updating chapters like he's doing right now.
This book has a unique and interesting plot. The setting is good especially when it's in the Philippines! Characters are already interesting. Just need a few more work with using the tenses but so far it's good! Wish you all the best! ??
1- writing quality: I’ve read the twelve chapters that are out so far and found only a few mistakes. The writing style didn’t exactly do much to hold my attention, but it’s fine. How ever the system prompts are very annoying, reading all of them could take some time.2-update stability: Ive read the first twelve chapters in a day or to so I don’t know how often author updates.3-story development: in the twelve chapters I’ve read the story hasn’t gotten the chance to develop very far, but its a good start.4-character design: all of the characters are based on sea creatures. only two of the characters have a defined personality, them being MC and his only friend/side kick5-world background: I can’t say much on the world background. however, I like the setting.
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