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Fascinating story. From the plot unique you can tell that it has the potential to blow into a sweeping story. There were logical errors there as well as sentences where the past tense should be used. But hey, we're only human. Apart from that, the story was straightforward to read and had a continuous flow. Keep up the good work. You'll do fabulous.
hey hey hey , isn't it kinda shameless to just copy the names of the Protagonist of Yakuza Game Series? and to boot it looks like it will go to the direction where yakuza headed. he has a younger sister in place of the daughter kiryuu adopted in the series.
Fluff Overload!! Cuteness is Everywhere and the World is Full of Sugar!!
Only Drawback is MC's Old Man Syndrome!! Makes you want to Shout!! : )
Loving the Interactions!! You just know.. MC getting a Jobs gonna turn Bad..
Hey Webnovelist!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email [email protected]. We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
The story had a good premise but the author drags out a single fight scene over about 10 chapters and then it's going on about the reactions of people to the fight in another 10 chapters. The story isn't progressing at all and its literally the same plot point said over and over from different points of view broken down but in a totally useless way.
Okay new readers, please give this novel a chance ?. Okay, review proper, this novel has good execution of the concept and the dialogues were also good. Very lifelike and realistic for me. Not everyone can pull it off so easily. It was like butter being sliced by a knife. Characters were fleshed out and so far, so good! Kudos and good luck! It was an amazing experience for my part and wished for other readers to share my experience too! haha ? Gracias!
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Interesting premice and worldbuilding but rather cliche charaxter and plot progression the author seems to sometime forget the levels of cultivation of the character from qi to core or core to nascent all around an enjoyable story when you want to pass time might rewiew again in the future
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I think this story has a lot of potential and the writing quality keeps improving.
The fight scenes are by far the best part of the book and well described. It’s almost as if you can see, what’s going on, in front of your inner eye.
The story is a bit fast paced, but otherwise I don’t have anything to complain about.
Keep up the good work.