Considering that this is the first work of the author as he said so himself, this is pretty good. The chapters are long and he could definitely chop them up to two or three chapters to gain more leeway in writing it, just saying. There were dark scenes as well hidden in there so watch out for it.
This is a story that strikes a unique balance, a realistic balance.
The mc is not a smartass, badass, or a emo drama con like most of the other novels.
The protagonist has more realistic behaviour than most stories, with his unique character flaws and quirks. Both negative and positive aspects. Hence when reading this book, you have to keep in mind that it's not a story about you or your hero, but a unique realistic character.
He makes mistakes, he gets lazy time to time, sometime he panicks, and sometimes he banters, but those are in small amounts and personal quirks. Most of the time he is smooth and cool.
The other characters (most non villains) are like that realistic, each with their personal quirks, both good and bad, albeit sometimes a bit weird. But that's on the aspect on it's in a cultivation world, different culture, different perspectives.
And lastly this has hands down the best system so far, like a good partner also with it's own unique quirks!
On the other hand if you readers enjoy reading something that is not OP, badass, smart ass, get all the girls harem king, picture perfect, god and demon worships hero. But a rather more slow realistic pacing and approach, even with it's own setbacks from certain situations. Then you will definitely love it.
The only down side of this book is, that like so many other author, has more other works, and thus makes the chapter quite short. While an author might think he needs to keep up with daily releases. It's not a big deal if it's a chapter every 2 or 3 days. That way readers can still enjoy it after coming back after a week or 2. But noooooo, the horrors!
Sometimes the chapter so short, that you won't even feel like reading anything even after bingeing 2 chapters.
Thankfully it's only some chapters like that.
I wish you all a good read, support the author by atleast unlocking chapters by paid coins, and hopefully stockpile 10 chapters before each read.
This book it’s pretty good I like the cultivation and how the mc is part beast which makes it even more ineteresting I have been looking for novels with systems and fantasy worlds like this
This story is so amazing, I never expect to read such an amazing work. If you are fan of isekai this is a recommendation, Keep up the good work author!!!!
Author does a really good job for storytelling. Some minor grammer issues but overall an amazing character and story development. The connection the author has with their audience is a nice piece of the story as well.
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This is a Fantastic LN! No I'm not a bot. This is a reincarnation into his younger self before great adventure of their planet begins. It so far seems to be a well written Sci-Fi LN. I have read up to the most recent chapter (117). This is still the begining of the LN so it is a bit hard to figure out the overall objective or direction the Plot will be going. So far the Sci-Fi or alien World (Online World full of alien humanoids) seems to be fun and interesting. I can't wait to see what the author has planed for the overall plot of this LN.
It was good but a lil lacking but the story base was good. It world be good if you keep up the good work. Since this is your first work it might be a little down but you’ll get better with time so just hang in there.
Nggk ngerti bhs planet. Tapi tetap semangat buat yg nulis. Jngn patah semangat, terus berkarya. keep spirit. ganbate. arigato gozaimatsue. ...