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Amidst the countless lists of zombie stories, I find this one most refreshing. The amount of character build up, tension, and worldbuilding felt just right and just at the prologue too!My only complaint would be the book formatting, I recommend adding more spaces.Other than that, please do upload more. it's been a wild ride so far and I want to see where you can take me.
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Sounds good, I am gonna give it a read.Looking at the comments I presume it is a dark fiction, and I love dark, gory books.As for romance, it is a no go. I hate romance, harem from the deepest bits of my soul.
This was my first ever introduction to ddlb and it did quite well. After reading the existing chapters (20) I felt like i knew what was going on at all times- even though I had no previous knowledge of ddlb. I have since gone on to look for other novels with ddlb and have felt quite underwhelmed. I feel like i have bee spoiled by this book. None of the other books i read, other than the author’s other story, come close to the storytelling experience this novel gave me. I have nothing bad to say about this story other than the need for proper tense consistency.
Hah~ it is worth my time <3 apart from Roberto, I don't know other soccer player lmao, but thanks to this I receive a lot of knowledge about the past's competitions and stuff :3 (if we add other sports then that would be the tennis player Nadal, Federer and the atlthere Bolt) Welp, I spend 3 days just to finish this lol
The MC (Wu Hu Young/Joshua Wu) was pretty op ... nupe! he's really op XD he only loses several times, I guess you can only count it in your hands lol. I was thankful this isn't a harem where many girls surrounding him and there's only a sole female candidate for him :3 even if their relationship suddenly went into that so fast lol xD
He doesn't have that much interaction with his family, well except at the beginning of course, and in the epilogue, as it was literally focused on soccer, there is no drama going on so its goods
This is complete bs, how tf did this got pick when it has lower fans than "My Learning Has Mutated". The difference is about 125 fans, 385 for dis and 510 for "My Learning Has Mutated". Absolute bs, "My Learning Has Mutated" is better than dis garbage."My Learning Has Mutated" is garbage too, but this one is on another level of garbage
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I'll speak my honest opinion, the novel is very good and I've already added it to my collection, I'm a fan of the fantasy genre and I really like system tags.
The world construction is very good and the plot is interesting, I hope the author stays firm with this novel.
another story about D&D wizards from the guy who wrote The Truth of Magic
i thought he'd learned his lesson because this one has a much stronger setting and starting system, but after ~100 chapters he jumps the shark again and throws out everything to have dumb action scenes where none of his previous powers matter and neither do the side characters
It’s not bad, the writing is pretty limited but understandable; which doesn’t make it good. It’s just minor things that can be fixed so easily but are ignored. Hopefully the author takes some time eventually to go through and edit to improve the overall standard and flow of the story.
I like the review and the comment. Just getting started..... I believe it going to be a great novel couple with the cultivation stuff.