this story has immense potential my only regret right now is there isn't enough chapters q,q
I like the story quite a bit but it needs some polishing to shine.
This novel start with a good line. The starter stories is good. But this is still the beginning. Waiting 4 more elebotation about the situation in mc. I shall await more chapter. Good job author.
I came to this novel when it was featured two months ago. Being the only "newly minted" novel without a single review or many views among the others in the list, I decided to give it a try, Looking at the caution about the novel possessing multiple main characters, it was rather unexpected.
And to be completely honest, I was blown away.
As a cultivation novel, the cultivation scheme is truly unique from the other novels I read so far. Although the naming scheme is similar to others, following the generic Xianxia format, the novel begins by introducing two concepts of existences, mortal and immortal, with distinct differences between them. The concept of immortals sacrificing a fundamental component of their existence in exchange for a true immortal life, and mortals unable to reincarnate once they begin cultivating, is truly a fascinating idea for a novel. Just by reading the novel with a cleared mind, it's fairly obvious that the way in which certain terminology are explained and introduced - by bouncing around a concept among multiple protagonists - allows for the reader to quickly understand without having to search on Google.
The fight scenes are relatively short, ending in a few exchanges, and I like that a lot. Not only does the clean, detailed description of each technique represents the author's dedication to the novel and the story's world alongside of its intrinsic elements, the novel doesn't deviate in a way that would confuse a reader who has never picked up a cultivation novel before. Yes, a few exchanges in a fight may be short for some readers, but it adheres to the concept that a fight generally consists of a few lethal blows, maybe longer fights if they are evenly matched, not to mention that the battles aren't skewed towards the protagonists.
The management between the three protagonists is simply amazing and worthy of respect. Not only are these characters interconnected in one profound way or another, the "plots" of each protagonist aren't independent routes. The decision of organizing the story in a chronological format, rather than a volume per character, is rather courageous and commendable. Not only do the readers get to know what happens in other places at the same time, it also represents change over time in society, cultivation hierarchy, or some other event - the novel possesses that potential, unlike many others at the early developmental stages.
Personally, I wished for there to be a little more dialogue. However, as I read on further, I realized that there was indeed no need to. The author adopts a considerably slower plot development rate than others, but is compensated for by detailed world building. Everything is properly introduced before the character makes their entry, and is defined in easily understandable layers. The internal monologue of characters are exquisitely described by action and not in a subform of dialogue, which is another interesting trait of the novel, one I have not seen for a long while.
If possible, this novel definitely needs to get the attention of many others. It's a superb piece of work, and although it's only on the first volume, the author's sheer work and care for the novel is fairly obvious.
I have been reading novels on pirated sites until now because I couldn't pay to get the coins on this or any other platform. but now I can
Woooooo
anyways I started reading this novel because I liked the cover but I love the story,
It has a unique concept, so I want more of these chapters so Writer-Sama keeps writing this novel.
Author here, are you looking to read a system novel with an MC who isn't just crying all the time? Writing novels is not a hobby its a lifestyle--prose? character development? worldbuilding? Seen it all. Are you looking for something special, something refreshing? Like a nice cup of ice-cold lemonade? I've got a it all.
It'll be something unlike anything you'll ever read.
I would appreciate it more if you paragraph it out, making it easier to read. Capitalisation and well other things. I basically ZOOM pass all the words, and you will understand it allGuy dies.Transmigrate, take over a "trashy" young master, in a Sect full of "perverts" hahaReceived a system to help him grow, and about this point, almost every "females" being used or used goods.Too bad ratings can't be updated? or can it. Anyway, read it as it is, or you be mind break
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Great book, my only issue is that there are too few chapters Writing Quality ★★★★★Stability of Updates★★★☆☆Story Development★★★★★Character Design ★★★★☆World Background ★★★★★
This is simply mind blowing. Never had I thought that I would encounter a well executed story like this in this platform. I didn't have any great hopes at first and just thought I will eventually get bored with it. But strangely enough, the story which I thought was boring made me spend the night reading, refusing to skip any words. I believe I could never reach this kind of skill in weaving a story, I greatly respect you Author Parmesan, this novel is marvelous.
I like how the main character was written! The pacing was well executed, and I like how the setting was fleshed out. Overall, though this isn’t what I normally read, this was a nice read.Keep it up!