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Vary perfectly Novel
Narration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyThis is my review! Hope you like it! ?
So far, I gotta say it started off quite well. I mean I didn't get borde within the beginning chapters, but instead became more intrigued as the plot progressed.everything else is also good. There are rarely if not any grammar mistakes or misspelled words and even if there are the author is quick to fix them if you point them out, which is a point in my book.It shows the dedication and passion of the author since he's willing to quick fix any mistake pointed out to him, unlike some other authors who just ignore it or say when I do a rewrite.Over all I rate this book a 5/5 so far. But if it goes downhill later on then I'll retrack my 5 star rating and reassigne a different rating of it then.
What happened that no more updates were uploaded by the author, the novel is good, well, I hope to see one more chapter of it, I did not stop writing it, it is good
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Overall it's a mostly decent story.Interesting World building, some really intriguing concepts, and some really cool side characters.However the big weakness of this book is the MC: He starts as a whiny, overthinking, self pitying, and overall very negative person. Which normally wouldn't be a problem except for one little detail: the Author drags Character development out WAY too long.After 187 chapters, the Character development can be called "slightly there" at best, and despite several life altering events that *should* improve the Character in a positive direction to a larger degree considering how jarring they are, the MC barely changes.Now, I'm not really an advocate of MCs who have drastic changes of personality practically overnight, this author has swung the pendulum too far to the other end, given the start state of the character in my opinion.TLDR; the Book is Good but, MC personality is that of a garbage human being, and takes too long (in my opinion at least) to improve
An interesting read, not gonna lie I quite enjoyed it. While there are some mistakes in your spelling and grammar here and there, the overall story is still very much enjoyable.A few tips so you can grow. :)The synopsis is one of the most important element of your novel. It is imperative that it is perfect, without any spelling mistakes. :)
An 'OK' book, just not my cup of tea. I don't have much to say other than author's writing style felt a little confusing to me. And I didn't really like the story, not much more to say.
i really like idea of your book its a fantastic story and i hope you continue to update i really loved it and i also recommend everyone to add it to their reading list
I have given 5