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Ok so I hate NTR with a bloody passion but and I havent read it at all but the fact that you decided to make this story for others who love to be cucked and enjoy NTR is a wonderful thing yes there are a lot of people that Hate NTR including me but im not going to ask you to stop keep up the good work imma give you 5 stars for encouragement and to keep writing.
Hats off to the author san for writing such an engaging read! the descriptions and narrations are simple but well-written and enjoyable! we see our MC's character first hand when he is willing to sacrifice anything for his family! But oh no! what happens at chapter 3? Is this the fate of our MC? READ TO FIND OUT. Highly recommend this novel that shifts from small moments of affection to seriousness. Best of luck sis!
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Keep doing i pretty liked .Please just dont put harem or romance .Battle freak or revenge is good choice I dont wanna see some stupid love story (girl is just weight )or MC who thinks with his dick. It must be like Daoist gu(personality)+Strongest system(story) .
I have to say that this book isn't bad at all. Like the idea of having the MC be a bit different from the usual MC's we see, in terms of race. It's a breath of fresh air.
I also like how the conversations flow. The dialogue between the three friends make the book a but more lively, so that's another plus...
Now for the cons...
There's a lot of unnecessary info being dumped in all at once, especially in the first chapter. There are minor grammatical errors that can't be noticed easily and more than a few punctuation errors. The Way it is written in first person is also a big turn off for me (personal issue). It think the story would be better if told in third person.
Overall, is till think this is a good one, as it is very comfortable to read. 4.0/5.0... ?
Okay, this is basically the first ML story based on reincarnation and system that I have read. And I'm tied to it with full interest. Looking forward to your updates Author.
Your grammars are perfect, and you kept me hooked, I was intrigued at first because of the mafia-like beginning... But now this wants to keep me going.
Thank you for creating this masterpiece.
This is the ML book I've read that kept me hooked, I like the way you started the first chapter.
Thank you once again.
to be honest I have not read all the chapter but when i read the first chapter it was truly amazing.
Más o menos, está entretenida a pesar de ser muy repetida por eso le voy a dar tres estrellas y porque está cosa me puede s huevo 140 caracteres
An amazing story so far, I especially like how it hasn't been rushed. The writing style, quality, design and world background are truly interesting in the growth that is shown in the chapters. I enjoy the fact that it isn't written like other game novels, and that the MC isn't instantly OP. Keep up the good work.
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The writing is very painful to read