Honestly I dont know what to say. One thing I do know though is that this isnt much of a system novel and it doesnt try to get serious. Its full-on wish fullfilment and theres no random young master that wants to make life hard for the mc.
I dont know how itll be possible for this novel to even get past the 200chapter mark unless it adds in powers and martial arts for some reason.
Mc went from a slightly realistic and commendable person, to "haha laid and girls go brrrr" in the span of 20 chapters. It will also clearly have some harem in it.
Not really my thing but if you dont mind any of those things that I mentioned, then feel free to read this novel
(Review 150 chapters+)
Positives: The story is very good, with many intriguing mysteries, the real and virtual worlds are very interesting and the game system is great. It's very good to read, with a consistent pace. The story doesn't move too slowly or too fast.
Negatives: At the beginning of the work, the author abuses the status window a lot, sometimes unnecessarily. But then he fixes it. I think the care and jealousy of the protagonist's family is too exaggerated. The fascination and adoration the girls feel towards the MC is also exaggerated.
SUPER NEGATIVE (ROMANCE - WITH SPOILER):
In my opinion the author is making a huge mistake with the relationship between the protagonist and Amanda. She has always loved the protagonist, always wanted his good and cares about him. When the MC unfairly became angry with her because of the incident, she continued to love him, always tried to talk to him and suffered alone for a long time. And after the MC finds out the truth, he friendzones her. He loved her and now the author wants to end it all. Whyyyyy??
On the other side is Luna. The protagonist interacts with her 3 times and in these 3 times the time they interact is a few hours. But that's already being enough to want to arouse feelings for her. DOES NOT MAKE SENSE! and it's unfair to Amanda.
Sorry for any mistakes. Google translate.
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Great job. Wanting more of this story. This is not my typical read but I am branching out and really enjoying this book. Its interesting and well written.
I see new novel. I click novel. I see Harem tag. I close novel.
both the title and the synopsis have nothing to do with the story, I think they put the wrong story in by mistake.
both the title and the synopsis have nothing to do with the story, I think they put the wrong story in by mistake.
Well above average but still too early to say anything conclusive.
-Flawed but overall OK translation.
-Interesting concept, plot has decent potential.
-Worldbuilding is intentionally unclear, so I can't really evaluate it.
-MC seems sentient but everybody else is a mob character. (So far apart from the MC there only seems to be 2 noteworthy named side characters; the general and the adjutant and even they seem to have limited use. Not much has been introduced).
Overall not too well written but not too bad either. This does come across as awfully bland at times but it is nonetheless one of the stronger novels from this batch. 3/5.
I think the author puts it the best when he says that it is a slow burn. The writing quality is good, not many glaring mistakes and the story seems to be coming along nicely. For a first work, the author seems good enough, surely he'll improve as the story goes along. This seems like a gradual buildup kind of deal. I feel like the story has done a good job dodging a the cliches and so far, it seems like the MC isn't going to get a sudden cheat that will let him uncripple himself.
Overall, I'd say, I recommend a read, at least.
I love fantastic fantasies and colorful lands. Magic battles and at the same this dash of realism. I always love seeing new ways creators handle these types of stories.
Completely immersive, it's easy to get lost in their story. I recommend this completely!
Hypocritical protagonist who gets his system stolen. His childish morality never changes and he is betrayed repeatedly
He is a weak minded coward who never learns from his experiences
The MC is so hypocritical and unlikeable like he legit damages a spirit beast permanently for no reason and the author tried to portray that as bada*s
Book has a good stability of updates although the author goes back and forth between this book and her other book "Anamnesis". The plot is about this trickster type of protagonist, manipulating others to their own personal desire. MC's also this black sheep type of character who doesn't cultivate in a world of cultivators as well, utilizing other means (DNA-manipulation) to get stronger.
Oh, and not so safe stuff, there's also not so safe stuff in there. (I mean, if you know what the current book cover is as I am writing this, then you know-you know.)
(Webnovel shadowbanned the last comment because it has the "s" word in there.)
Overall, I think the book's worth reading. Give it a shot and form your own opinions too.