very interesting and challenging
Great Story waiting for your update soon
Love this story so far!! ......... Please update it soon ......
Tired of cliche stories. Try and come up with a new plot that’s not predictable. I get that this is apart of a competition but what makes your book stand out from the others? I’ve read two other books that starts out similar to this one. A omega/shewolf trying to clean or cook and not get beaten.
Can't wait to start reading
Thank you for reading the book
beautiful story, love every it
Amazing ?.....This story is already giving me goosebumps ????
Ending was a bit rushed but it was a good ending wished the battle played a bit wonder what happened to Karen
It becomes easier to understand later on
to give a more constructive answer to you, harems are sh*t, and romance is almost always never done well in light novels, only western novels have a consistent formula for decent romance
I find it intriguing how some people can justify the character's lack of morality in the story, considering her decision not to pursue a professional athelete career and the fear her family, friends, and peers exhibit towards her. Here's a hypothetical scenario: A young girl bravely saved her friend from a life-threatening attack by a large, vicious dog in a playground, risking her own life in the process. Despite her heroic act, she sustained severe injuries that left her unconscious due to blood loss.
In a morally upright society, would anyone fear such a hero or condemn the dog owner instead? In fact, wouldn't there be calls for stricter regulations against large dogs in playgrounds? However, the girl's own parents react with fear and distance, which raises questions about their ability to care for her. As an only child, this situation raises concerns about their suitability as parents.
The author's narrative seems disconnected from reality, as the girl's parents are deceased, leaving her without societal support. From a young age, she must work grueling 100-hour weeks, though it's unclear whether it's out of necessity or choice. All this drama and trauma feel unnecessary, given that the story revolves around gaming live streaming, which could have been handled differently without resorting to clichés.
Additionally, while becoming a professional gamer might be challenging, the author suggests it's easier to become a successful streamer, which seems inconsistent. A more compelling storyline would have involved the protagonist transitioning from a professional athelete to a streamer. Unfortunately, the current story lacks depth and finds its interest mainly in the gaming world, which isn't particularly captivating on its own.